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I know he croaks, croaks and croaks. Like a croaker on a rainy day he talks; He croaks, and I hear his prolonged croak, Yet why dry dung his throat does choke? Croak! I know, his croaking is a flaw, But another’s flaw now begins to glow; Croak! Croak! I do hear his guttural croak, Yet why dry dung his throat does choke? Whizz… a bloodhound flies sky-bound. There! a dead swan thuds on the ground; A king a wanton archer inaptly does crown; Aha! this man now proves king a clown. This piece is based on a tale in which a king hired a wanton archer to sling cow dung balls into his minister's/advisor's mouth, for king despised him for talking too much. *5th Place* in the following contest (judged on Oct. 1, 2020) Oct. 2, 2020 "The Unexplained" Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 10/2/2020 3:37:00 PM
How funny! - I think you are the 'wanton'. Were you hunting frogs? An unexplained scenario fits the topic... Intriguing, who is emulating a frog? Congratulations on your Win, Newton.!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/2/2020 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this immensely great comment!! This piece is based on a legend about a talkative minister/advisor to a king, who hired an archer to sling cow dung into his talkative minister's/advisor's mouth.
Date: 10/2/2020 11:21:00 AM
- Great written, Newton :) - Congratulations on your 4th place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for the sweet comment!!
Date: 10/2/2020 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 10/2/2020 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carolyn, for considering this piece for a placement in your contest!!

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