Prize

Be young my boy
Don’t rush to grow
The secrets of age
will soon be told
Fish in creeks
Gaze at the sky
Stay young and curious 
for a while

Laugh from your belly
Wink and grin
Hit a ball with a stick 
you don’t need to win
Dance to the music 
in your head
Move here or there
as Simon says

For soon enough
time marches on
That little boy
he does move on
If you are lucky
you will realize
to keep a bit of him
is a precious prize.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 2/27/2025 7:30:00 PM
This poem is nice, it tell you to keep your youth alive and tell not to rush to become adult because youth is something once you pass it you will miss it forever.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2025 10:15:00 PM
True. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 7/7/2024 8:14:00 AM
Sweet. Hope there's a little bit of him in you still. :) How are you doing? Long time no hear... hope all is well. Big hugs. PS... thanks for you visit, Richard.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/8/2024 6:33:00 PM
Enjoy. Miss you; that's all
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2024 4:19:00 PM
Busy with a bunch of family visiting. Fun but exhausting at the same time. We are on the third wave of visitors.
Date: 7/2/2024 7:35:00 AM
Richard, I absolutely LOVE this poem. Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/8/2024 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Janice.
Date: 6/24/2024 10:13:00 PM
Your poem resonates with me. I honestly feel I'm growing down. Nice one Richard. Cheers - Gary
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2024 11:02:00 PM
I know the feeling. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/23/2024 7:02:00 PM
How did I miss this? Love the innocence, the wistfulness, and the retro awareness, Richard. Thanks, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/26/2024 11:03:00 PM
Happy to have you visit.
Date: 6/16/2024 6:10:00 AM
Hello rich...it's been a while though I'm back relishing this poetic work...I like the cadence of your lines along with its meaningful content...a wonderful piece of advice!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2024 7:05:00 AM
So nice to have you visit. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 6/15/2024 7:21:00 PM
May you always carry a bit of that boy inside Richard. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2024 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Linda, he gets me n trouble from time to time.
Date: 6/13/2024 10:15:00 AM
It has been my advice to children for a long time. Those happy years should be held for as long as possible. I like this view. Must fav.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Hilda. ;0)
Date: 6/12/2024 7:17:00 PM
We should always strive to keep the little boy or girl inside of us intact. Poetry does that for us Richard, it keeps us youthful and real. Really enjoyed this :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/13/2024 5:35:00 AM
Thanks Rose. ;0)
Date: 6/12/2024 4:18:00 AM
Hello Richard, What a nice, heartfelt call to cherish youth’s innocence and wonder. The wisdom lies in preserving that spark—a treasure beyond measure! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2024 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Daniel.
Date: 6/12/2024 3:47:00 AM
Richard, a great poem and message. When we're young we want to be an adult and when an adult we wish to be able to be young again.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/12/2024 6:48:00 AM
Thanks Tania.
Date: 6/11/2024 11:30:00 AM
Hi. Read this on FB. Lovely advice. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thanks, hugs Rick.
Date: 6/11/2024 5:42:00 AM
My wife likes to say I'm still a little boy, throwing stones, breaking sticks off trees etc. I guess maybe we're all a bit like that. Nice write Rick
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2024 9:02:00 AM
Thanks buddy.
Date: 6/10/2024 10:38:00 PM
YES! Love this. God bless you, love, Gina
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/11/2024 5:21:00 AM
Thanks Regina.
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