Prize

Be young my boy
Don’t rush to grow
The secrets of age
will soon be told
Fish in creeks
Gaze at the sky
Stay young and curious 
for a while

Laugh from your belly
Wink and grin
Hit a ball with a stick 
you don’t need to win
Dance to the music 
in your head
Move here or there
as Simon says

For soon enough
time marches on
That little boy
he does move on
If you are lucky
you will realize
to keep a bit of him
is a precious prize.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Captain  Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 7:30 PM
This poem is nice, it tell you to keep your youth alive and tell not to rush to become adult because youth is something once you pass it you will miss it forever.
Lamoureux Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 10:15 PM
True. Thanks for the visit.
Manassian Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 8:14 AM
Sweet. Hope there's a little bit of him in you still. :) How are you doing? Long time no hear... hope all is well. Big hugs. PS... thanks for you visit, Richard.
Manassian Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 6:33 PM
Enjoy. Miss you; that's all
Lamoureux Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 4:19 PM
Busy with a bunch of family visiting. Fun but exhausting at the same time. We are on the third wave of visitors.
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Richard, I absolutely LOVE this poem. Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
July 8, 2024 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Janice.
Radice Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Your poem resonates with me. I honestly feel I'm growing down. Nice one Richard. Cheers - Gary
Lamoureux Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 11:02 PM
I know the feeling. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 7:02 PM
How did I miss this? Love the innocence, the wistfulness, and the retro awareness, Richard. Thanks, Gershon
Lamoureux Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 11:03 PM
Happy to have you visit.
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Hello rich...it's been a while though I'm back relishing this poetic work...I like the cadence of your lines along with its meaningful content...a wonderful piece of advice!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:05 AM
So nice to have you visit. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Fowler Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 7:21 PM
May you always carry a bit of that boy inside Richard. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thanks Linda, he gets me n trouble from time to time.
Greenhough Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 10:15 AM
It has been my advice to children for a long time. Those happy years should be held for as long as possible. I like this view. Must fav.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Thanks Hilda. ;0)
Rose  Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 7:17 PM
We should always strive to keep the little boy or girl inside of us intact. Poetry does that for us Richard, it keeps us youthful and real. Really enjoyed this :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 5:35 AM
Thanks Rose. ;0)
Rodgers Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 4:18 AM
Hello Richard, What a nice, heartfelt call to cherish youth’s innocence and wonder. The wisdom lies in preserving that spark—a treasure beyond measure! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Daniel.
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 3:47 AM
Richard, a great poem and message. When we're young we want to be an adult and when an adult we wish to be able to be young again.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 12, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thanks Tania.
Manassian Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Hi. Read this on FB. Lovely advice. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Thanks, hugs Rick.
Mcintosh Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 10:38 PM
YES! Love this. God bless you, love, Gina
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2024 at 5:21 AM
Thanks Regina.
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