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Pristine Pondering

What were my eyes searching for As we sat awhile above the crowd? Taking in the freedom’s wind Forming shapes from timid clouds I cast my cares to the brisk mountain air In hopes that I might see What hunter's eyes had not yet spied in curiosity I asked myself is there such a place In the deepest patch of wood? Where human hands have not yet touched and feet have not yet stood? A place the axe has ne'er been rung Or a bullet's aim has failed Beyond the azure lakes and streams Where a child's boat has sailed A place in which the artist's brush Has not been quick to spy Where nature reveals her handiwork Unknown to human eye Where boughs remain unbroken And peace is ever still A part of life we have yet to find And perhaps we never will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/14/2017 11:33:00 PM
Lovely poem. I can see why you are ranked 3rd on the list of best new poets. Congratulation you moved up from #4
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/15/2017 4:16:00 AM
ahhhh!!! I did? I am still trying to figure out how it works around here!
Date: 3/14/2017 2:21:00 PM
I would like to find a place like that...a true utopia
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/14/2017 3:42:00 PM
Ooh me too!
Date: 3/14/2017 8:27:00 AM
Majestically flow your lines like a river free in this beautiful 'pristine pondering'. 7 Amitiés
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/14/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you for taking time to read it Anne-Marie. Your comments are much appreciated :)

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