Pristine Pondering

What were my eyes searching for 
As we sat awhile above the crowd?
Taking in the freedom’s wind
Forming shapes from timid clouds

I cast my cares
to the brisk mountain air
In hopes that I might see
What hunter's eyes
had not yet spied
in curiosity

I asked myself 
is there such a place
In the deepest patch of wood?
Where human hands 
have not yet touched
and feet have not yet stood?

A place the axe has ne'er been rung
Or a bullet's aim has failed
Beyond the azure lakes and streams
Where a child's boat has sailed

A place in which the artist's brush
Has not been quick to spy
Where nature reveals her handiwork
Unknown to human eye

Where boughs remain unbroken
And peace is ever still
A part of life we have yet to find
And perhaps we never will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/14/2017 11:33:00 PM
Lovely poem. I can see why you are ranked 3rd on the list of best new poets. Congratulation you moved up from #4
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/15/2017 4:16:00 AM
ahhhh!!! I did? I am still trying to figure out how it works around here!
Date: 3/14/2017 2:21:00 PM
I would like to find a place like that...a true utopia
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/14/2017 3:42:00 PM
Ooh me too!
Date: 3/14/2017 8:27:00 AM
Majestically flow your lines like a river free in this beautiful 'pristine pondering'. 7 Amitiés
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/14/2017 8:32:00 AM
Thank you for taking time to read it Anne-Marie. Your comments are much appreciated :)
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