Pristine and Purdy

I'm pristine and purdy for dear Dr. Kim Changed my undies, I'm all proper and trim Checks out my bod And gives me a nod If all's copacetic, no strange lumps therein © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Eastman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Me new heart Doc said yesterday that I have bradycardia and some times hypercardia too... Yeah I knew that- so what's new?... To the love of life- I've got to be true... As we give Tim a party, we go whooo Who.. As on life I have a happy view!!!
Ellison Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:29 PM
Happy Happy Timothy!!!!!!!!
Smith Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 2:28 PM
The doc got you on the straight and narrow...no more chasing the sparrow...hunting the fox...eating bagels with lox...just sitting back catching all cupid's arrows
Ellison Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:28 PM
"lox" eeeeeeuuuuwwwww!
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