* The Next poem on my list (Primeval) is the Rhyme version of this same picture / idea *
Oh, jungle, deep ... hug me close your jade breast - I long to hear a thrum within ... let your warm whispers tickle the tympans of my ears with sultry songs of your essence ... and your tangle of mysteries. Face-to-sky, I breathe ... heaven's warm weep patters - rinses, bright, your petals and paths, echoing tender through primal magnificence, the labyrinth of rills and falls. A breeze born of orchid and paradise, presses your breath to me, and I wonder aloud of blessings as pure and perfect, of moments as divine, of this, the bloom ... of life. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Any Poem You Want To Write Exactly 100 Words" Poetry Contest, Caren Krutsinger, Judge & Sponsor. ( Words = #100, counted at PoetrySoup.com )
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