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Priss As a Peacock

Priss As A Peacock Priss as a peacock proud as I am, I prance ore the garden waving my fan. Proud Senorita crown all in tact, waddles and wades train trailing back. Glorious gait eyes all a glow, regal and royal she puts on a show. Till one small flaw Her neck stretched up high, She screeches an opera Like one who has died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2010 2:13:00 PM
Excellent one ..that brought a chuckle..Beauty sometimes has a flaw...Keep the creativeness flowing, Lady..Here a while back we were somewhere and I saw a Peacock and told my husband to stop and let me get a picture but he didn't...I wanted to write something about it when I got the picture to look at...I am really glad that you did this..Sara
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:03:00 AM
hahaha, great ending stanza!! a very fun write. I think for the contest, right? Luv, Andrea
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