Prisoners

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We are locked up free the same time in our minds prison without bars how did we end up remotely controlling all we do as slow drones we hover over our uncouth bodies what would it feel like to be mind only me only, you only afloat in each other Mind over matter so they say *** July 26, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 1:38:00 AM

mmm, I like this one a lot! And to me I see a waiter holding out a tray serving? Thought!!!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/30/2017 9:53:00 PM

Very thought provoking poem, Darren. I love this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2017 5:34:00 PM

wow, mind over matter. This is GOOD work, Darren. Love this.

Frank Sheehan

Date: 7/26/2017 11:50:00 AM

Wonderful write. Enjoyed it immensely. It rings of truth.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/26/2017 9:52:00 AM

Whoa! I thought I was the only one who feels like this. This is fantastic. So well expressed. Its in the plan Darren, someday we will break free. - Dean

Tim Smith

Date: 7/26/2017 8:28:00 AM

Makes for beautiful thoughts

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2017 7:46:00 AM

Excellent poem, Darren, makes one ponder:)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/26/2017 5:55:00 AM

Very well written Darren. Excellent :)