Prisoner of Myself

I’m a prisoner of my own soul & my own mind.
My soul must be blind to see only darkness.
I don’t know…
But I feel so alone.
Am I raged with fear? 
Or only in despair? 

No matter how I try, 
I just can’t seem to free myself from this hell.
No matter what I do, 
The shackles just won’t break!

No matter what I try, I find myself stuck in this lonely hole.
I find myself alone with this sound of silence. 

No matter how I try, I just can’t seem to breath again.
No matter what I do, I find myself inside this room, 
Where the world’s walls are closing in on me.

When will it end? Am I destined to never escape from this hell?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 4:59 AM
Ahhh, a damsel in distress... I see many knights of the Soup table riding to your rescue. Welcome to you, dear lady... May I be of service?.... Jake... or you might take the offer made in "We've Been Alone Too Long" found in my portfolio. Regardless, welcome... May you find comfort here.... Jake
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November 6, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Heather, this one's great! Our future, hopes and dreams will always rely on what we have inside as a being! Yes, we're prisoners of our own but we can also be the same bird that could fly high and be free depending on how we value our own. Welcome to PoetrySoup by the way! Your new souper-friend! All the best! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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November 6, 2013 at 2:57 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Heather ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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November 6, 2013 at 12:28 AM
hey Heather, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 5, 2013 at 10:53 PM
Hello,Heather ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Palmer Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 8:34 PM
great write Heather,I feel your pain in these words,prayer works,check out my page sure you'll find a poem or 2 to uplift your soul
Peterson Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 7:35 PM
With great care, you've put feelings and words together. Poetry pushes out and sinks within and eases trying moments. Keep writing and invite the thoughts that heal. My best, and I welcome your voice here.
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