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Prisoner of Love

Oh with her sweet smile
I was taken prisoner,
cry of the castle
shackled to chains of desire
captive hopelessly in love.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Dan Kearley

Date: 7/15/2013 9:57:00 PM

Oh! You must have clicked? Ha-ha.. :o)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 7/9/2013 12:32:00 PM

Excellent and outstandingly beautiful write my friend. You have made it a real classic Poem Harry. It goes into my favorite one. Love and best wishes..Ravindra

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/3/2013 2:31:00 PM

This is very well written. Captive hoplessly in love. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/2/2013 6:09:00 PM

harry, A great 13th century romance packed into this luscious poem. ... :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/1/2013 5:51:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed. Tfs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/30/2013 7:07:00 PM

Dropped by to see if you posted anything new and to say hello.

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/29/2013 11:16:00 AM

it is naturally and beautifully worded the prisoner of love, my sweet friend. You do always miracle by extracting raw ore to finished one. Loved always, bl

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/29/2013 3:17:00 AM

Love the comment below and yes I love this too xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2013 8:15:00 PM

Makes a guy want to go to prison. Well done Harry! Hopefully she isn't wearing a chastity belt.

Donna Jones

Date: 6/28/2013 6:44:00 PM

Wow....impressively romantic....

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/28/2013 1:35:00 PM

Harry this an outstanding Tanka. If your to come a prisoner, shackled to chains of desire is the way to go. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2013 1:34:00 AM

VERY good stuff, my friend. Glad to see a new one posted. one of your best tanka.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/28/2013 12:59:00 AM

Oh Harry! You are a hopeless romantic! Yea...takes one to know one, Right? :) BTW...I HAD read this before but I wasn't in a good enough place to comment. I was in a slump. Getting better. This is gorgeous, Harry. Hugs