Prisoner

Send me back home where I truly belong Cut the chains dear, please let me depart Why does your brain keep replaying our song? Let my melody drift to your heart Making me haunt you is very unkind I'm no ghost dear, please grant my parole Why bottle me up inside of your mind? Set me free to go dwell in your soul

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:59:00 PM

ok, I got the soup mail

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 2:01:00 PM

hi Tim, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA

Tim Ryerson
Date: 7/29/2014 2:12:00 PM

Sent a text

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/28/2014 8:26:00 PM

Truly a beautiful write.... Big congrats on your win!!!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2014 11:55:00 AM

It's lovely to have this poem on the winners' list once again; it merits it! Congratulations, Tim. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/28/2014 10:36:00 AM

I really like this piece. I hope she grants your parole. Congratulations!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/28/2014 7:17:00 AM

Congrats on a great win with such a heartfelt write, Tim, my dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/28/2014 1:18:00 AM

Lovely write on love and longing, Tim. Congrats

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/28/2014 12:08:00 AM

Nicely done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Tim Smith

Date: 7/27/2014 10:36:00 PM

Amazing Tim...congrats on the win

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/27/2014 8:56:00 PM

You're exactly right, Tim. Love should only come from the heart!.... I really enjoyed this unique perspective on love and longing. Very nice work! Congrats on your win!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/6/2014 7:54:00 AM

This is very touching Tim..congratulations on your win....hope all is well....:-) :-)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2014 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win. I enjoyed the poem, tim

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2014 8:50:00 PM

I agree with Andrea, this sounds like it could be a song. Congrats on your win, Tim! Love, KIm

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2014 9:19:00 PM

Tim, this is mighty deep... love the ending. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 5:40:00 PM

Hi Tim, Congratulations, awesome VERSE! xox ~LINDA

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/4/2014 12:12:00 PM

wew!!! ...awesome... awesome..awesome... this one deserves a standing ovation from the crowd!!! ..it really moved me, Tim!!! ...you are great poet I adore so well... CONGRATULATIONS!!!! SALUTE' ..;O))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2014 12:39:00 AM

The one most like a song in my contest. maybe one day we will hear one of your songs in nashville!! Congrats for your win, Tim.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 3/7/2014 1:09:00 AM

Tim, it has genuine feelings in it, expressed in an enchanting way. Congrats, friend!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2014 9:02:00 PM

a very interesting one from you, tim. It looks so familiar to me too and yet I don't have any comment down below here yet. Glad to be able to see it on the winners list. congratulations! It's quite romantic!