Prison Walls

From my self made
Prison walls
I look outside
And see the sun

The ocean breeze
Reaches me
I see the seagulls
Flying free

These hard and cold
Stone cell walls
Close around me
Cut my thoughts

This debilitating
Fear a feel
It's like a prison
Halting my dreams

I wanna fly
High in the sky
Like those seagulls 
Without a fright

To reach beyond
This self made walls
To expand and become
More than my thoughts

I'll take a leap
Based on faith
I'll break those chains
And fly away

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December 18, 2016
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Calasibetta Avatar
January 14, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Claudia, this is so poignant and I love the artwork you have chosen for the visual effect.
Polydoro Avatar
January 15, 2017 at 4:13 AM
Thank you so much Paulette... actually this artwork inspired the poem - it was a first for me. Hugs :)
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 6:31 AM
Claudia, you have touched my soul! I work in upper Prisons but your poem talks to me directly-though I am not understanding it literally. Cheers! Solomon Ochwo Oburu
Polydoro Avatar
December 25, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Solomon! I'm glad it touched you! Hugs :)
White Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 2:23 AM
I love your poem in those short, longing, sentences. It speaks to me of freedom, of rising above it all and move far, far away.
Polydoro Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:44 AM
Thanks hun... That was my intent... Unfortunatelly I can't post the picture that inspired it here... in the future, maybe... :*
Beam Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Very nice expressions and I hope you will. John 8:36 If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed.
Polydoro Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 4:42 AM
Thank you!
Law Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Isaiah 40:31 "They will rise up with wings like eagles"
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