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Sun settles On the winter chimes While setting. As crystals, virtuous choir, ring— running frost on glass; shadows back off At bruised muse's plaid light split— cold brass on fire Sun settles From December's trill Like bright gloom.

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Date: 1/2/2024 7:35:00 PM
Love that first haiku! So smart!
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Date: 1/1/2024 9:04:00 PM
You are amazing dear paige! Happy new year, and i hope you had a fresh start. I absolutely love the flow of your haiku and monoku, especially the monoku. “ Cold brass on fire” and “ chorus light split” so much depth in those lines so descriptively delivered! Its so good to see you post and i always enjoy reading your work. Sending you light today and always
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Date: 1/1/2024 8:17:00 AM
Lovely verse, enjoyed
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Date: 1/1/2024 5:20:00 AM
Nicely done Paige... Lovely imagery and that monoku is excellent..
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Date: 12/31/2023 9:35:00 PM
cold brass on fire - beautiful
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Date: 12/31/2023 4:46:00 PM
I like the format your used. It was effective; I especially liked "sun settles from December's trill like bright gloom.' Happy New YEar, Sara
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Date: 12/31/2023 2:49:00 PM
Nice form combo Paige
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