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Prior to Intent

her presence at first sight
an illumination
something I didn’t understand

she stirred imagination

a current ran through my body
and whatever stirred
was beyond comprehension

an angel, perhaps

I watched
as she checked into my life
and disappeared without a word

but she lingered in my mind

a constant stirring

until the next time
when I said hello

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Date: 8/2/2025 10:11:00 AM
That's a brilliant write. Loved reading it. Stay blessed always!
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Date: 7/31/2025 11:14:00 PM
Good people are just like that , they come and go form our lives. May such angels take care of us all. Best wishes and congratulations.
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Date: 7/28/2025 1:33:00 PM
Wow. Wish I could think something like that up. I just can't answer the line of inquiry given. Hope you get a win
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Date: 7/27/2025 8:27:00 PM
This resonates so with me, Mike... Hard to tether these 'angels.' Once they flap their wings, just can't keep 'em down on the ground. ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/26/2025 9:16:00 PM
It's a good start. I hope it works.
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