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Primordial Swill

I looked up to see A voracious mite looking down at me Looking up to see Glowing plankton looking down at me Looking up to see Busy Nano in the primordial swill Looking down at me Looking up to see The alarm clock telling me Wake up and go to work I had a great time writing this poem for Nina Parmenter's Mini Verse poetry contest on this second Wednesday in July, twenty nineteen

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Date: 7/14/2019 3:36:00 PM
I like! It's playful and just darned cute! All the best ... CayCay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/14/2019 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much CayCay! :)
Date: 7/11/2019 6:35:00 AM
Delightfully whimsical, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 7/11/2019 7:31:00 PM
Thank you LINE!

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