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Primavera, Sandro Botticelli

if I were to manifest 
your magic as my divine dusk,
O musk of damask starlight's glow,
must I slow-trace 
        soul’s rhyme,
explore the exotic ecstasy 
      within exquisite exclamations 

and if, 
to frame the flame of faith
within your impulses,
I must tiptoe down 
the altar of your undeniable heat,
sway ~ sanguinely in sync
with the rhythm of scribed similes,
devour the devoted desires
of dulcet darkness,
for you and the hues 
    of silent sighs ~
breathtakingly belong to
the ache within my
           sleepless highs …

so tonight,
        listen to the 
cadence of these eyes ~ 
f    a 
    l   l 
       i
     n    g  ~ 
compulsively, catastrophically, 
like a storm of firefly feathers,
         breathing you…

you are mine ~ O flower moon, 
in muteness and in musicality,
of forest-deep passion,
clothing my conscience 
             in sweet compassion,
my pulse in magnetic motion,
a breeze of zephyr ~ 
undefinable
and I am the archaic echo 
alliterating the heavenly nights
with unrehearsed reverence,
wanting to home the silhouette
       of worded wilderness…
to feel me, weave me warm

    as unspoken thoughts ricochet 
        ~ an inescapable intuition ~
quenched beneath Cupid's drizzles
         of love’s sacred rain…
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Magdalinos Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 2:24 AM
Dear Ink Empress ,Congratulation on your win. Very enchanting poem !!
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Back with congrats, sweetie. Way to go.
Croft Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:37 AM
Very very beautiful. Congratulations on your win
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:32 AM
Thank you beautiful soul. Sending you light always
Poet Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Oh, wow, the creativity in the use of metaphors and similes paints vivid pictures, such as "musk of damask starlight's glow" and "storm of firefly feathers." Your poem is so rich with comparisons and original thought that it sets itself apart from traditional approaches to the subject. Enjoyed reading your poem after my long absence. I hope you are always well.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:32 AM
Thank you so much dr sotto, hope you are doing well, i appreciate your visit and kindness, always, sending you light always.
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Wow. I just saw Joe's comment way down under mine. He chose the same two examples of your great imagery as I did!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 2:20 PM
So many phrases to admire inside your poem here, Ink. Like "alliterating the heavenly nights" or "dulcet darkness"(I think I used an image like that one myself the other day). I really love the word dulcet. Was this meant for one of Brian's contests. It's beautiful. In Spanish, Primavera means springtime. The picture seems to denote that as well . Is it a style of painting you like ?
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:30 AM
Yes i find paintings that inspire me sweet Andrea, i follow a lot of art pages on facebook, and if i see something that connects with my mood, i read more on google about the background of the artpiece, and what its about, i knew the meaning yes and thats why i have spring metaphors also i use dulcet alot i almost used it for my poem for your contest tooZ hah! Thank you for your generous support. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 1:46 PM
Your poem definitely captures the confluence of figures in the Boticelli painting. The painting, like the poem, has an unbreaking movement
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:31 AM
Awwn thank you sweet hilda, your words warm my soul, sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 5:49 AM
Ah Spring! The Right Of! "I slow-trace soul’s rhyme, explore the exotic ecstasy" -- very beautiful! "devour the devoted desires of dulcet darkness, for you and the hues of silent sighs ~ " -- Great imagery! "I am the archaic echo alliterating the heavenly nights with unrehearsed reverence," -- Purely flowing, enchantingly romantic. Great poetry!
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 10:31 AM
Thank you so very much dear Joe, i appreciate your kindness truly. And you always feeling the essence of my poems. Sending you light always
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 5:35 AM
Wonderful!
Seeker Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 7:02 PM
Oh my, my!! A clear fav for me! Hypnotic, captivating and oozing with love.
Empress Avatar
May 11, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Ah dear seeker, your fave is like a win for me, thank you so much for reading and feeling the love in this. Only few can feel my emotions in poems and you are one of them. Sending you light always
Liguori Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 2:10 PM
This poem would be well received by any audience!!! A delightful read. Thank you.
Empress Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 2:23 PM
Oh lol thank you dear robert, you are so kind! Sending you light alwys: i was just sleepless and wrote a cat senryu n posted! Hope to see you write too. Sending you light
Onpaper Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 10:07 AM
must I slow-trace soul’s rhyme, explore the exotic ecstasy within exquisite exclamations.,, ooo this question got me on an extremely exquisite exclamation indeed papi!!! devour the devoted desires of dulcet darkness, Ooo that alliterationssssszzz… quenched beneath Cupid's drizzles of love’s sacred rain… oooo quenched u say??? I mean … um quenching in a clench here with the heat of these flawless architectural elements… absolutely breathtaken by the elegant beauty of your creation papi!!
Onpaper Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 10:11 AM
Aaaaaaa ohoh! Ohoh! Ohohhhh! XDXDXDXD
Empress Avatar
May 10, 2026 at 10:10 AM
Welcome back papi!
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