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Primal Instinct

Violent attack,
An aquatic invasion:
The tigress’ hunt.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/3/2010 11:52:00 AM

Like a scene from a nature programme. You can feel the anquish of the hunted. Wonderful Haiku Raul >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/4/2010 3:44:00 PM

Oh yes I can see what you have written. Thank you for sponsoring the contest Raul. I am really slipping on my Haiku for some reason. I need to get with it somehow. Thank you for your comment on my writing today. It means so much to me to see your comments. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 5/4/2010 3:17:00 PM

I want to thank you so much, Raul, for my 10th place in your Primal Instinct contest. I am very honoured and happy. I am starting to really love this haiku form, thanks to your inspiring contests.. and congrat to all the other winners.. love constance

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/4/2010 9:00:00 AM

As always, you can offer a winning poem for your own contest!! Another terrific haiku, Raul....and many thanks for placing mine in your recent contest! You really received a wonderful response, with creative poetry! Love, Carrie

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 8:49:00 AM

Great Haiku-expression, querido Raúl! Thank you for your kind comments...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 4:55:00 AM

As always your depiction of your own photo far surpasses those written by all of us as your instincts are ingrained deeply within u as an artist and a poet... appreciate being chosen 6th for Survival Sequence.. this photo was dynamic Raul... thankxxx for the experience ... have a happy day... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/4/2010 3:50:00 AM

Nice expressive images.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2010 10:40:00 PM

wow, Raul, thanks so much for second place. Can't wait to see who got first! I love the second line of this: Aquatic invasion. Very clever. It's nice how you do your own poem and show it at the end! LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/3/2010 10:37:00 PM

I could see that scuba diver tiger was angrY..tnk God i wasn't her prey:)..That would be her Primal Instinct to attack..thats so true..excellent..glad I'm here reading:)..Charma

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