Primal Instinct

Violent attack,
An aquatic invasion:
The tigress’ hunt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Like a scene from a nature programme. You can feel the anquish of the hunted. Wonderful Haiku Raul >> James
Brown Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Oh yes I can see what you have written. Thank you for sponsoring the contest Raul. I am really slipping on my Haiku for some reason. I need to get with it somehow. Thank you for your comment on my writing today. It means so much to me to see your comments. Love, Carol
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May 4, 2010 at 3:17 PM
I want to thank you so much, Raul, for my 10th place in your Primal Instinct contest. I am very honoured and happy. I am starting to really love this haiku form, thanks to your inspiring contests.. and congrat to all the other winners.. love constance
Richards Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 9:00 AM
As always, you can offer a winning poem for your own contest!! Another terrific haiku, Raul....and many thanks for placing mine in your recent contest! You really received a wonderful response, with creative poetry! Love, Carrie
Knop Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Great Haiku-expression, querido Raúl! Thank you for your kind comments...Gert
Sweetheart Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 4:55 AM
As always your depiction of your own photo far surpasses those written by all of us as your instincts are ingrained deeply within u as an artist and a poet... appreciate being chosen 6th for Survival Sequence.. this photo was dynamic Raul... thankxxx for the experience ... have a happy day... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Mehta Avatar
May 4, 2010 at 3:50 AM
Nice expressive images.
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2010 at 10:40 PM
wow, Raul, thanks so much for second place. Can't wait to see who got first! I love the second line of this: Aquatic invasion. Very clever. It's nice how you do your own poem and show it at the end! LUv, Andrea
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May 3, 2010 at 10:37 PM
I could see that scuba diver tiger was angrY..tnk God i wasn't her prey:)..That would be her Primal Instinct to attack..thats so true..excellent..glad I'm here reading:)..Charma
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