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Pride of Place

Mum's snap beams on the hall as a nudge of eagerness. The serenity of the shore sparked glorious heedfulness Yet when I deem warily, truth seems to become ageless The waves shift as the light shines through the dimness. A little girl remains amid sand-covered greenery. Her quivering hands grasped a fistful of sublime confetti The subtle art, with its vivid tones, bears a rosy tangibility The rare sight of a little girl around the ocean is lulling me.
Written: January 23, 2022 Pride of Place Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 5:56 AM
The ending line brilliantly evokes the allure of the place, Lasaad. Treasured memories resurface. My very best for a TOP win.
George Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 5:27 AM
A beautiful entry for the contest.... ! Wish you all the Best dear friend !
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 1:27 AM
Brilliantly written.
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