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Mum's snap beams on the hall as a nudge of eagerness. The serenity of the shore sparked glorious heedfulness Yet when I deem warily, truth seems to become ageless The waves shift as the light shines through the dimness. A little girl remains amid sand-covered greenery. Her quivering hands grasped a fistful of sublime confetti The subtle art, with its vivid tones, bears a rosy tangibility The rare sight of a little girl around the ocean is lulling me.
Written: January 23, 2022 Pride of Place Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 1/24/2022 5:56:00 AM
The ending line brilliantly evokes the allure of the place, Lasaad. Treasured memories resurface. My very best for a TOP win.
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Date: 1/24/2022 5:27:00 AM
A beautiful entry for the contest.... ! Wish you all the Best dear friend !
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:27:00 AM
Brilliantly written.
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