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 Written 18th May

Hair Composition Poetry Contest - Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

 

 

Pride in Their Hair

Be dark or fair, folk have pride in their hair Although often hair leads one to despair Finding it's tousled and tied up in knots After sleeping upon one's precious locks. Or when hair has been lovingly blow-dried Getting caught in the rain and tears are cried For you and me hair’s our crowning glory Without hair on head tops, what would life be. Hair enhances one’s looks, protects one’s fun Stops scalps from burning when out in the sun It keeps heads warm when the weather is cold Hair's certainly worth its value in gold. Through the years my hair has turned shades of grey It can't be helped, it's simply natures way I don't mind the grey, I treasure the gift That brightens the day, giving one a lift. My humble blessings may have you appalled Because of them who happen to be bald To me being bald is beauteous too What's in the heart, not on the head, makes you.
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Wolf Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 9:18 PM
Huzzah, Beryl! We all, myself definitely included, need to peer into the heart -- and forget the hair. ~ Gershon
Edmonds  Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 12:39 AM
I agree with you Gershon, it’s what’s in the heart and not on the head that’s makes a person what they are. Thank you… Beryl
Flood Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Hey, Beryl… didn’t you know… grey is the new silver. Enjoyed your hairy tale… but I need to figure out why my crowning glory doesn’t stop my head burning in the sun…. Alas… I think I know :-(
Edmonds  Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Thank you Terry, it’s a blow when the hair on one’s head decides not to grow. Perhaps that’s why the sun scorches your head, with a wide parting and thinning back and sides, it shouldn’t come as a surprise… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 3:58 PM
Nice positive message on hair and in some cases, and especially lack of hair. Between the sun and my hair, there's nothing there, except some air.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 2:06 PM
As long as there’s air on your head, there’s no need to fret.Thank you David… Beryl
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Very fun, we do love having our hair just right! My hubby has a partially bald, but very much-loved sweet head, I love him exactly the way he is. It is sad that it makes him rather unhappy to be thus, but it is him and he is my love! :) Good luck in the contest!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Thank you Bj, my husbands hair is now thinning, but I still like it the way it is… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 3:45 AM
The majority of women can still have pride in their hair. Not men, especially if they are bald. Thank God I have plenty of white hair. :) Hugs.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 20, 2025 at 1:47 PM
It’s a sad fact victor. women usually keep their hair longer than men do. It suits men to be bald though, women not so. I’m pleased that you have plenty of hair, white too, lucky you… Beryl
Lane Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Such a fun write with great advice, Beryl. I gave up coloring years ago… such a messy procedure. I love my silver hair!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:11 AM
Thank you Lin, I’ve given up colouring my hair too, letting the silver threads stay, I love them too… Beryl
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