Constance La France Poet Choka

Pride

I am a proud girl,
proud of achievements and work,
of family and country.
But, sometimes I lean
to arrogance-  to much pride
to accept a helping hand.

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October 28, 2018


Poetry/Choka/Pride
Copyright Protected, ID 1060-031-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

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Constance La France November 10, 2018 at 12:29 PM Thank you Edward for visiting my poem and commenting. I wish you had placed it too but onwards to your next challenge ~

Edward Ibeh November 10, 2018 at 11:46 AM Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Constance! I really liked this and wish I placed it. I strongly encourage you to join my next contest. Wishing you the best of luck!

Constance La France November 10, 2018 at 8:48 AM Jack thanks for visiting and commenting and I am so sorry about your mom . I am sending prayers.

Jack Horne November 9, 2018 at 3:30 PM love this frank write, my friend - love to you & kitty x mum needs a brain scan to determine the cause of her memory loss & confusion

Constance La France November 9, 2018 at 2:35 PM Thank you Chris, Kim, and Andrea for visiting and for the great comments, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich November 3, 2018 at 9:13 PM I am enjoying seeing the sins people choose to write on. I chose one that i simply can't relate to (anger) i think if i wrote the one I most relate to, it would be gluttony (in my youth for food, but today for all the stuff I get so involved in!) GREAT job with your entry, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues October 29, 2018 at 9:27 AM I think taking a helping hand allows someone else to bless you and that is a gift to them. Nicely said!

Chris Green October 29, 2018 at 9:05 AM Nicely expressed. I loved this short but enticing poem. Nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest