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Pride

I am a proud girl, proud of achievements and work, of family and country. But, sometimes I lean to arrogance- to much pride to accept a helping hand. ____________________ October 28, 2018 Poetry/Choka/Pride Copyright Protected, ID 1060-031-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Constance La France

Date: 11/10/2018 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Edward for visiting my poem and commenting. I wish you had placed it too but onwards to your next challenge ~

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/10/2018 11:46:00 AM

Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Constance! I really liked this and wish I placed it. I strongly encourage you to join my next contest. Wishing you the best of luck!

Constance La France

Date: 11/10/2018 8:48:00 AM

Jack thanks for visiting and commenting and I am so sorry about your mom . I am sending prayers.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2018 3:30:00 PM

love this frank write, my friend - love to you & kitty x mum needs a brain scan to determine the cause of her memory loss & confusion

Constance La France

Date: 11/9/2018 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Chris, Kim, and Andrea for visiting and for the great comments, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2018 9:13:00 PM

I am enjoying seeing the sins people choose to write on. I chose one that i simply can't relate to (anger) i think if i wrote the one I most relate to, it would be gluttony (in my youth for food, but today for all the stuff I get so involved in!) GREAT job with your entry, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/29/2018 9:27:00 AM

I think taking a helping hand allows someone else to bless you and that is a gift to them. Nicely said!

Chris Green

Date: 10/29/2018 9:05:00 AM

Nicely expressed. I loved this short but enticing poem. Nicely done my friend. Best of luck in the contest