Daniel Hunter Poet Free verse

Pride

Pride

You spoke,
my ears heard.
My pride didn’t

You were hurt,
my eyes saw.
My pride didn’t

You cried,
I wanted to comfort.
My pride didn’t

I wanted to show
what’s inside.
My pride didn’t.

I watched you go,
I wanted you to stay.
My pride didn’t.

I sit empty now.
You left.
My pride didn’t.


2.28.18

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 28, 2018 at 1:31 PM Hello Daniel, You should have showed her your feelings.But something stopped you. Only you know why. have a nice day my friend.