Patrice Trice Jackson Poet Concrete

Priceless Coffee

faint
                                                    sinew
                                                          Buoyant
                                                     Crema
                                            Nutty
                                       So
                                            Sugared
                                                          Dark
                                                     Tart
                                             Bean
                                    Sup
                                        Firey
                                              Purr-
                                                    mm.
                                                        sip.
                                                   Sup.
                                     Coffee Caramel Macchiato        
                                     Cubano Americano grains -sup
                                      A  earth  in  my  mug ;     -sip
                                      Voyage over Nations      -sup
                                       Live, no fed sorrow     -sip
                                         Prickling mug....   -sup
                                           Comfort blazing
                                             In tip of my
                                                 soul
                                       as I gain what they grow

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Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 10:03 PM Hi Patrice, I found this well written write to be very creative. Congratulations on your 1st place wi . It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Agnes Krampe December 11, 2016 at 5:59 PM Oh, what a lovely creative formatting, Patrice. Congrats on your win. Patrice Trice Jackson December 11, 2016 at 6:34 PM Thank you Anges, I'm glad you really enjoyed my poem... God bless

Kim Rodrigues December 11, 2016 at 4:40 PM A beautiful concrete poem! Your descriptions and your sip..sup, priceless! Thank you for entering my contest and congrats, Patrice! Kim Rodrigues December 11, 2016 at 5:09 PM Your welcome! God bless you too! :) Kim Rodrigues December 11, 2016 at 5:09 PM Your welcome! God bless you too! :) Patrice Trice Jackson December 11, 2016 at 5:07 PM Thank you Kim Im glad you really enjoyed my poem... God bless

Doug Vinson December 2, 2016 at 2:00 AM :: laughing :: This is so great. : ) Patrice Trice Jackson December 2, 2016 at 10:37 AM Thank you Doug... God bless...