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I miss you, the way you smell, the way you taste. I miss you, the smile my words put on your face. I miss you, how impossible life is, when you are away. I miss you, without your existence we all would fade. I miss you, it’s true, it’s something you can’t deny. I miss you, could you see your worth through these brown eyes. If you, could see how much you mean to me. And how incredibly important you are, for a true humanity. It’s simple, without you life cannot go on. So never give yourself away, or stay somewhere you don’t belong. So all along, if truth be told, you’re worth so much more than diamonds and gold. If you cannot see, then please believe, these words I have fought so hard to speak. You are a queen, you’re royalty, the stars that shine above the sea. The make-believe, in making sense, if you ever think you are anything less. Your whole entity is precious, and I’m talking all the way through. So I wrote this poem, to let you know, how much I’m missing you. I love you most, trust me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/16/2017 3:10:00 PM
Nice! Did she read it?
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Date: 10/10/2017 5:05:00 AM
Love is precious, and this poem shows how important love is to human existence.
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/13/2017 3:50:00 PM
Love is all important. I hope you have much love in your life and thank you for sharing some with me! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 10/9/2017 10:52:00 PM
This reads in some places that it refers to more than a mere human being. But can this be your Love? If it is, you have elevated that person to the status of a deity in some lines. I might be wrong, but I get that sense in some lines. The poem is a bit weak reaching the middle part going to the end, but the start is good. Thanks, Luis Estable
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Date: 10/9/2017 3:30:00 PM
Amazing pen...love colored ink!
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/13/2017 3:49:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/9/2017 2:58:00 PM
A true testament of love, Tony. My compliments!
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Date: 10/9/2017 2:57:00 PM
A true testament of love, Tony. My compliments!
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/13/2017 3:49:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 10/9/2017 2:33:00 PM
Tony Brady...I'm trying to find the words to describe your poetry......(Having grave difficulty here but I'll try)...Your words are genuine, soulreaching and powerful..You are blessed with the gift of expression.. I get from your writing that you have a beautiful soul..May God continue to bless you..
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/13/2017 3:48:00 PM
This is one of the best compliments that I've ever received. Thank you very much. I try to be genuine with my art and hold nothing back. I also try to have a beautiful soul...Thank you. May God bless you as well!
Date: 10/9/2017 2:07:00 PM
your love for her is so deep. thank you for sharing such depth of emotions. beautifully written. tears as I read.
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/13/2017 3:46:00 PM
Wow. Thank you so much. I'm glad my words touched you so strongly. :)
Date: 10/9/2017 1:54:00 PM
Romantic,sincere and so beautifully written.
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/10/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 8/11/2017 6:00:00 PM
Breathtaking and inspiring!
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Tony Brady
Date: 10/10/2017 9:18:00 AM
Thanks! :)
Date: 8/2/2017 6:06:00 AM
This is amazing
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Tony Brady
Date: 8/4/2017 11:47:00 PM
Thank you very much! :)

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