Priceless

In the dim glow 
Of the candle
She could see his face
The shadow of a smile
Feel the warmth of his embrace

He held her close
The music set the mood
She drank in his scent
Her emotions she could not subdue
His whispers so sweet
Dripped like sweet tastes of wine
The brush of his lips 
On her neck were sublime

They loved through the night
As if it were their first
But this love had lasted fifty years
As unquenchable as a desert thirst

In her eyes he still saw
The love of his youth
He still called her his girl
She still felt pursued
At night when they slept
He still held her hand
Her heart would never belong
To any other man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Rhinem Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 9:37 AM
Ps. Just for the record....almost two years ago I gave my desk top computer to my nephew~because at the time. It was taking up to much of my time at soup....Smile....so I got rid of the temptation!!!~Bye Again Laurie:):)
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March 11, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Hi Laurie!:) Smile~I do not do soup mails dear! But I do do emails! Yet, never worry~Smile~for "You" shall "Always" be special to me!!! As a matter of fact~the more which I behold "You," the brighter and brighter within eyes "You Become!!!"~"My Love To You Always Laurie, John!!!!":):) Ps. My blackberry does not pick up soup mail? And I only use computers at work and in my car~yet I am off today~Smile~I hope it was something nice You sent!?~Bye Dear!:):)
Atanacio Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 9:30 AM
a soft side....hmmm
Gass Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations on your win in Kristins contest. Laurie! Even lovelier upon the second read! Love, Robin
Heck Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 2:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Ms. Reynold's contest! Kudos to you! Peace always, John"
Winter Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 9:35 AM
Love reading this again. Warmest congrats Laurie on your win in Kristin's contest! Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 11:40 PM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest.Laurie.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Truly beautiful writing, Laurie...so heartfelt, and seemingly real enough to belive that love like this was true. Congratulations on this making the finals in Kristin's contest. Love, Carrie
La France Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Congrats..a beautiful love poem
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Laurie congrats on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
Degenhardt Avatar
February 4, 2009 at 12:25 PM
This has so much passion, I almost feel like a voyeur. Excellent imagery and flow in this. Love this read. Michael
Esquire Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Dear Laurie, This is the most beautiful LOVE POEM I have ever read I have Known of such LOVE He is a very Special Gentleman to have This HEARTFELT Dedication Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments I will be making a few more comments after I finish a 5 part POEM I'm working on now YOUR POETIC Friend...HG
Ingle Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 9:35 PM
Dang it girl, you got me all worked up now..quit it...dad nab it!! Great writing..loving story..warm too...A lot of heart in it...wonderful ..thanks for sharing...Lawrence in Louisville...
Curcio Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Wonderful. Everyone should have that kind of love in their life.
Brown Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Laurie, this is so beautiful. And it made me cry. So much love and warmth. Outstanding writing. Love, Carol
Voorhees Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 9:13 PM
A great write on how this kind of love still exists....I don't see it with guys and gals my age too often...but I'll see an old couple holding hands and smiling as they talk. I want that!
Burton Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 12:45 PM
Love this poem and makes me remember about the relationships I screwed up back in the day which wasnt long ago. enjoyed reading this and have a blessed day.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:25 PM
The institution of marriage is certainly not what it was... prenups and quickie divorces are far too prevalent. BFRAVO to those who remain together with love and devotion. An excellent and most inspirational piece Laurie! Best wishes, Keith
Richards Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 8:35 AM
Those who find this...are the luckiest people on earth. Love can last a lifetime...such a love poem...and it means so much more than yearnings of younger love...love takes years to ripen into something this wonderful. ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 7:51 AM
Laurie, this is absolutely beautiful. A perfect title, too. Reminds me of my husband and myself, honestly. An amazing dedication. Love, Shar
Ginn Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 7:38 AM
YES WE DO! Sooo maybe a bit touchy on that one but baby one day I will have it!!! okay just a couple more!!
Gass Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 6:14 AM
What a beautifully written dedication, Laurie. It is certainly a wonderful thing and the way it should be with love. A touching and heart felt write. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I thoiught it would be nice to give something back to Raul for all his kindness. Love, Robin
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