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Preventing Knotted Knickers

A person asks a question Simply looking for a fact, And then appears surprised to hear The answerer react. For what he meant within his mind Was not what was received; A harmless query somehow’s got The questioned one quite peeved. It isn’t only Venus-Mars For gender’s not to blame, As words are often twisted, Adding fire to a flame. A simple explanation Often sets intentions right; Ignoring such solutions Sets the stage up for a fight. The remedy is obvious But not an easy task: With knickers still unknotted, Take your doubts in hand and ask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2012 10:55:00 AM
How true, this has even happened to me here on PS. I asked a poet who was running a contest if the judging was done as I had an N/A beside my poem but no date that it had been judged and wondered why... ended she blocked me, until I could fully explain my question. So easy for people to read into innocent questions. Well done Lee
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Date: 8/10/2012 3:25:00 AM
My hubby always gets his knickers in a knot -usually when he trying to unknot mine, but I keep them well padlocked ha ha xx
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:01:00 PM
geeez, this is SO true with my hubbie. Constantly getting in little fights with me over NOTHING. Talk about your knickers in knots. His are tied double knotted!!
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:01:00 PM
oh, I see someone else here caught on to the Erma Bombeck of poetry thing!!
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:08:00 PM
I commented on this witty write earlier today and I see that it didn't register underneath...bummer...this is like an Erma Bombeck sort of write where she delivers wisdom from her corner of the newspaper each week...Very very nice work here, Ilene! (A prize for arriving here first?....) hahah gwendolen
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