Pretzel Rods

The corner candy store displayed,
On the counter next to where you paid,
Tall pretzel rods, two cents a pop,
In a glass container with a top.

They were often added to a bill – 
Toss some pretzels in, please, if you will –
Or were ordered by a kid who’d planned,
His pennies clutched in a sweaty hand.

But the best was sitting on a stool,
On a Saturday or after school,
With your mom who’d let you have a treat – 
A vanilla malted, cold and sweet.

It was served within the silver cup
Which the owner’d used to mix it up
With a pretzel rod included, free;
There was no place I would rather be.

The sweet of sugar, tang of salt
Combined with the vanilla malt
Made taste buds squeal with pure delight
With each and every sip and bite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 10:06 PM
It is 12:05 a.m. and I am in the throes of making myself a malt. You are to blame.
Leffanta Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 6:51 PM
This should earn you quite a number of freebies! Aloha! Rico
Edmonds  Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Sounds like a real delicious treat Ilene, sweets don’t taste half as good as they did when you were young, tasty memories... Belle
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 1:05 PM
what incredible imagery of your childhood memories I could almost taste these delicacies:-) a sweet poem in so many ways:-) hugs Jan x
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