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Pretty Teresa

Pretty Teresa
In the dim lit room sat an old geezer
Waiting patiently for the stripteaser
He waited in vain
For to his disdain
Came along songstress pretty Teresa.
1st April 2021

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2021

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April 5, 2021 at 5:59 PM

Hello Belle ... a fine limerick indeed. The old geezer better enjoy a song or two to hide his disappointment - thanks Belle - Lindsay

April 5, 2021 at 8:38 PM

Hi Lindsay, ha a sing-song is better than nothing. Thanks for reading and commenting... Belle

April 2, 2021 at 12:47 PM

Lol! Belle, Hey, you're good at these. I enjoyed the read. Have great day and a Happy Easter:-) Alexis

April 5, 2021 at 8:34 PM

Hi Alexis, pleased you enjoyed the read. Had a lovely Easter, hope you did too... Belle :-)

April 1, 2021 at 11:52 AM

Naught to worry as it was probably his naptime anyway! Aloha! Rico

April 1, 2021 at 5:16 PM

Ha, probably was Rico :-) Belle

Regina Mcintosh

April 1, 2021 at 4:03 AM

LOL... Cute. Love to you and God bless you too. Love, Gina

April 1, 2021 at 5:17 PM

Thank you Gina, love and blessings... Belle

March 31, 2021 at 7:42 PM

I guess the poor old geezer had to keep his instincts in the freezer! Cute one, Belle. Love it! :) gw ... By the way, was it 'Mother Theresa?!' lol

April 1, 2021 at 12:09 AM

Thank you Gershon. Guess he did too, non tonight, as for Teresa, not only a mother a grandmother too :-) Belle

March 31, 2021 at 6:22 PM

lol! A clever and humorous limerick, Belle. Love the rhyme of "geezer" with "stripteaser" - fun and fantastic! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

April 1, 2021 at 12:05 AM

Thank you Susan. Warm wishes in return to you... Belle

March 31, 2021 at 4:29 PM

cute one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

March 31, 2021 at 4:30 PM

Thank you Jan :-) hugs Belle xx

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