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Pretty Teresa In the dim lit room sat an old geezer Waiting patiently for the stripteaser He waited in vain For to his disdain Came along songstress pretty Teresa. 1st April 2021

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/5/2021 5:59:00 PM

Hello Belle ... a fine limerick indeed. The old geezer better enjoy a song or two to hide his disappointment - thanks Belle - Lindsay

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2021 8:38:00 PM

Hi Lindsay, ha a sing-song is better than nothing. Thanks for reading and commenting... Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2021 12:47:00 PM

Lol! Belle, Hey, you're good at these. I enjoyed the read. Have great day and a Happy Easter:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2021 8:34:00 PM

Hi Alexis, pleased you enjoyed the read. Had a lovely Easter, hope you did too... Belle :-)

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/1/2021 11:52:00 AM

Naught to worry as it was probably his naptime anyway! Aloha! Rico

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/1/2021 5:16:00 PM

Ha, probably was Rico :-) Belle

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/1/2021 4:03:00 AM

LOL... Cute. Love to you and God bless you too. Love, Gina

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/1/2021 5:17:00 PM

Thank you Gina, love and blessings... Belle

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/31/2021 7:42:00 PM

I guess the poor old geezer had to keep his instincts in the freezer! Cute one, Belle. Love it! :) gw ... By the way, was it 'Mother Theresa?!' lol

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/1/2021 12:09:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. Guess he did too, non tonight, as for Teresa, not only a mother a grandmother too :-) Belle

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/31/2021 6:22:00 PM

lol! A clever and humorous limerick, Belle. Love the rhyme of "geezer" with "stripteaser" - fun and fantastic! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/1/2021 12:05:00 AM

Thank you Susan. Warm wishes in return to you... Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2021 4:29:00 PM

cute one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/31/2021 4:30:00 PM

Thank you Jan :-) hugs Belle xx