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Pretty Sentences

I got an ugly duckling pen that’s always trying to write pretty sentences My plain consonant smiles don’t have a poetic glow beautiful I have a missing vowel or two, enamel thoughts in need of a good fairy to come through Pretty sentences are my Glenda ... my Snow White My beloved Bewitched If I give my pen a little twitch — Presto ... bingo Abracadabra! Got my talking muse carpet flying out of a writer’s block ditch Pretty sentences have such cute adjective pigtails They can make a grown boy cry, and make a macho man-child wail Pretty sentences brings out the feminine empathy, hidden beneath the surface, deep inside the very heart of me Love passion that’s hot ... sin rejection that’s cold Feelings not bought, feelings not sold Pretty sentences found is word treasure rarer than lost gold Pretty sentences always do a polite curtsy when they come to a gracious end Just an old-fashioned decent way to let another shy pen know they’ve found a new poetic friend A beautiful rainbow swan swimming in the same ink pond with a quill ugly duckling

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Date: 12/12/2017 11:48:00 AM
Very inspiring write that I relate to. The perfection that is displayed versus the transformation one makes after an experience of change. To believe in the ugly duckling we all go through feeling and acknowledging that others feel different yet the same is where my life has given me new insight. Loved this full of inspiring thought in this personification poem! XO
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Date: 12/12/2017 9:41:00 AM
Very poetic--adorned with love of writing!
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Date: 12/12/2017 9:15:00 AM
I love this fun poem Freddie. ! This is excellent! :)
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