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Pretty Ponies

I thought there would be pretty ponies Ponies to carry me around the bend But I find there are no ponies at all Only empty wishes at the end...

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/30/2013 12:39:00 PM

Oh........this is as sweet as it comes......the realities of life coming true!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2013 10:13:00 AM

I am with Frank. LOVE this.

Ralph Mason

Date: 8/29/2013 8:23:00 PM

It's never too late for the ponies! Enjoyed your poem. Warm thoughts, Ralph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 6:44:00 AM

Cute one..I feel some sadness there..Life can issue out some sad surprises sometimes..Thanks for the visit..Your comments are always uplifting...Sara

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/29/2013 2:10:00 AM

Hi Barbara, I liked this creative write..Thanks for stopping by my work.. Regards, Ken