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Pretty Neat - Nursery Rhyme

a face two hands a couple of feet think about that pretty neat a clock keeps time without a brain ~ when we're late Who's to blame April 12, 2021 Nursery Rhyme 4 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2021 12:38:00 AM

First place is 1st Place Gershon. I don’t feel that they are in any particular order. I am so happy to see your poem with the top placement. Congratulations! This is a keeper! Blessings xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2021 7:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, Connie. I'm glad that I went with your tip. So many others have confirmed that you were right. (Even if the placements actually are in order of 'one-ness.'). Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/17/2021 1:19:00 PM

A delightful rhyme, Gershon! Congrats on your 1st place win in Eve's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2021 8:05:00 PM

Thanks for your support, Kim! And once again congrats to you and 'Mr. Mouse!'

Carol Mitra

Date: 4/16/2021 11:27:00 PM

Thought provoking....Congrats on your win Gershon...do take care :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/17/2021 8:02:00 PM

If I had known you would comment, I would have baked a cake-- oops I guess you've tried that, Carol. Congratulations on your win in the contest as well. Cheers, Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2021 2:14:00 PM

- A fun little poem, Gershon:) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2021 4:38:00 PM

Thanks for noticing my win, Anee-Lise. Cheers, gw

Eve Roper

Date: 4/16/2021 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Gershon! Singing nursery rhymes and songs to children as young as babies can help develop their language and communication skills from an early age. Come visit me in my blog Nursery Rhyme 4 - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2021 1:06:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for sponsoring such a wonderful congtest, and for your over-generous assessment of my nursery rhyme. Happy weekend, Gershon

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/16/2021 10:37:00 AM

Wow! Your poem is pretty neat too! Clock is always a perfect topic for nursery rhymes, but yours is unique. BW ~ Mala

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2021 1:01:00 PM

Thanks, Mala. Clock's ticking on the weekend now. Happy weekend to you. :) gw

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/16/2021 2:15:00 AM

Back with my congratulations on your win Gershon, well done ~ Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2021 12:48:00 PM

Thank you, Belle. Nice of you to notice. Happy weekend! :) gw

Judy Ball

Date: 4/13/2021 12:52:00 PM

This is a great nursery rhyme Gershon. A great way to get little ones interested in learning to tell time. Good job. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2021 3:33:00 PM

I hope so, Judy. Thanks for your support. Light and Love, Gershon

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/13/2021 2:42:00 AM

Very good Gershon, what a brilliant idea for a nursery rhyme is time, children will love it. Belle

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2021 3:33:00 PM

Hope you're right, Belle... And thanks for the doff of the cap. :) gw

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/12/2021 10:03:00 PM

Neat how the clock has some of the same parts that we have. As someone who's prone to running late, I blame the clock.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/13/2021 6:31:00 PM

Now, Juliet. It's only a machine! lol. Peace, gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/12/2021 9:09:00 PM

Hi Gershon, What a clever, creative and educational write. It's a good one for the little ones. Best wishes in the contest. Good job:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/12/2021 9:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words and support, Alexis. Blessings, Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/12/2021 8:09:00 PM

I hope you enter this in Eve's contest Gershon. I think it would work fine as an entry. I loved your wit! I faved it! Blessings xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/16/2021 12:59:00 PM

Well, as you can see, I've entered the poem per your instincts, and it earned a first-place trophy, albeit down the list most of the way. No complaints here. Thanks again for the tip, Connie! Happy Weekend, Gershon