Pretty Broken Things

Pretty Broken Things       

In dreams I cut away a piece of your hurt
chew it
Bloody and raw
Pain dripping from my chin
Streams of salty warm copper

The way hurt must taste.

In dreams I stand beside you
Shouldering the weight
Impossible bags of wet sand

Heavy like hurt must be.

In dreams I piss out the fires
Lit by the monsters that follow 
People like you

 Pretty broken things
 Born into golden houses

 One day
 Forgotten by the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 30, 2015 at 3:04 PM
I love this, WOW,, Milledge, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 30, 2015 at 11:08 AM
Hi Milledge, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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September 30, 2015 at 9:45 AM
I like the rawness and it makes me want to read it more than once. Some pain will never go away it just doesn't hurt as much.
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