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Preterition Swears On the Bible

Preterition Swears on the Bible

                                   with all due respect
                                I was home watching tv
                                  your noble honor ~

                                 it was half-past nine
                               the only reason I know
                                  O.J. was winning ~






               ~jill~

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/16/2017 6:05:00 AM Interesting senryu with great humor. Growing up, O.J. was my favorite athlete. It took me a week to get over the shock! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/12/2016 10:24:00 PM jill, very nice, 7 Login to Reply Jill Spagnola Date: 5/16/2016 11:43:00 PM Sincere thanx, :), jill

Bl Devnath Date: 5/6/2016 11:01:00 AM Beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Jill Spagnola Date: 5/7/2016 12:18:00 AM Thank you beautiful B.L. :), jill

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/5/2016 8:06:00 PM hahaha, This is AWESOME. Love the O.J. reference. Login to Reply Jill Spagnola Date: 5/6/2016 2:51:00 PM :)....Thanx Andrea, it was a really interesting style:),peace, jill

Jan Allison Date: 5/4/2016 4:36:00 PM Made me smile Jill:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Jill Spagnola Date: 5/4/2016 4:41:00 PM Yay for the smile! That's a win for me:), love and lightness, Jill