Jill Spagnola Poet Senryu

Preterition Swears On the Bible

Preterition Swears on the Bible

                                   with all due respect
                                I was home watching tv
                                  your noble honor ~

                                 it was half-past nine
                               the only reason I know
                                  O.J. was winning ~






               ~jill~

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Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2017 at 6:05 AM Interesting senryu with great humor. Growing up, O.J. was my favorite athlete. It took me a week to get over the shock!

Constance La France May 12, 2016 at 10:24 PM jill, very nice, 7 Jill Spagnola May 16, 2016 at 11:43 PM Sincere thanx, :), jill

Bl Devnath May 6, 2016 at 11:01 AM Beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl Jill Spagnola May 7, 2016 at 12:18 AM Thank you beautiful B.L. :), jill

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2016 at 8:06 PM hahaha, This is AWESOME. Love the O.J. reference. Jill Spagnola May 6, 2016 at 2:51 PM :)....Thanx Andrea, it was a really interesting style:),peace, jill

Jan Allison May 4, 2016 at 4:36 PM Made me smile Jill:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Jill Spagnola May 4, 2016 at 4:41 PM Yay for the smile! That's a win for me:), love and lightness, Jill