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Preterition Swears On the Bible

Preterition Swears on the Bible with all due respect I was home watching tv your noble honor ~ it was half-past nine the only reason I know O.J. was winning ~ ~jill~

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/16/2017 6:05:00 AM

Interesting senryu with great humor. Growing up, O.J. was my favorite athlete. It took me a week to get over the shock!

Constance La France

Date: 5/12/2016 10:24:00 PM

jill, very nice, 7

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/16/2016 11:43:00 PM

Sincere thanx, :), jill

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2016 11:01:00 AM

Beautiful haiku my lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/7/2016 12:18:00 AM

Thank you beautiful B.L. :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2016 8:06:00 PM

hahaha, This is AWESOME. Love the O.J. reference.

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/6/2016 2:51:00 PM

:)....Thanx Andrea, it was a really interesting style:),peace, jill

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2016 4:36:00 PM

Made me smile Jill:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jill Spagnola
Date: 5/4/2016 4:41:00 PM

Yay for the smile! That's a win for me:), love and lightness, Jill