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Retirement day came for the most responsible employee of the company Thirty years of waking up each morning at 5:00 a.m. in the morning Making routinary tasks without stopping except for the lunch break A surprise tribute was arranged by their coworkers and supervisor Balloons, flowers and a swiss watch were part of the gifts to Tylor The ballroom hotel was decorated with exquisiteness and elegance Tylor was in his apartment dressing up, waiting for a limousine He was feeling very nervous as he was going to an important event Meanwhile, in the hotel the music was playing with enthusiasm Appetizers, pastries and other delicacies were served in the tables Tylor arrived with his charming wife to the five star hotel lobby Hours passed by and the supervisor of Tylor did not arrive to the tribute The senior chairman forgot one of of the most events of his hectic agenda A Skype conference amended with success the unintended omission For Preterition Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sara Kendrick Fiveteen Place 4-11-2016

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Date: 5/18/2016 3:48:00 PM
Nayda, congratulations on your placement in Sara's Preterition Contest. Great poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/18/2016 4:33:00 PM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 5/18/2016 10:03:00 AM
I like how there is a hint of Preterition at the next to last line..Thanks for participating in my contest..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/18/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thank you Sara
Date: 5/18/2016 4:11:00 AM
Hi Nayda. Congrats for your placement in the contest, with this brilliant verse!! ;-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/18/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Teddy

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