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Written 12 May 2026 for 1471 Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Presumptive Pride



a carefully curated posture
shoulders back, chin high
bathed in self assurance
wearing a veil of confidence
thinking can sway the earth

always at centre of stage
fishing for recognition
taking inflated credits for success
bragging of achievements
fancy knowing all
 not inclined to learn
to avow mistakes

self-conceited
sense of self- importance
holding themselves in the sky
others as inferior 
on low ground

heart turned to stone 
seeking own gains
rooted in self exhaltation
raising own ranks
heeding not what others think

words chosen
like precious stones
each syllable weighed
polished, and displayed
for admiring eyes

 speaking of journeys
never taken
of battles fought
in hushed rooms
 victories whispered
to an invisible court

laughter too loud
too bright
a manufactured chime
to mask silence
that would otherwise reveal
hollowness within

 inhabiting a rarefied air
where common ground
is but a place
they condescend to visit
a fleeting curiosity
before returning to their peak

 building castles
on fleeting sands
fortified with opinions
that echo their own voice
a fortress of ego
impenetrable
 sadly, alone

 constant striving
not for growth
but for image
 reflecting in lake
that never ripples
always perfect
 ever staged

 in  quiet moments
when performance falters
when mask slips
a flicker of doubt
a tremor of fear
reveals the fragile soul
beneath the regal facade

soon curtain rises 
spotlight finds its mark
and the curated posture
steps back into place
the perfect illusion
restored once more.
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