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Presumptions

add or subtract from senses five or rotate gender putting it mildly we'll be perturbed force of gravity should it be fickle or sunlight dims putting it mildly we'll be perturbed enslaved by desire in grooves of habit stance stuporous why then aren't we perturbed 31-October-2022

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/31/2022 10:58:00 AM

I loved your poem, Seeker. Your imagery coupled with your wonderful diction shed a beautiful and stunning layer on your writing. Blessing dear friend

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/31/2022 5:32:00 PM

Thanks Sotto ~ an urge to exit our deep rooted conditioning brought this one up

Ann Peck

Date: 10/31/2022 8:05:00 AM

Exactly--why aren't we? As you point out--"in grooves of habit." Very thought-provoking poem, Seeker!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/31/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thank you Ann.