Notes About The Poem

An acrostic is a poetic technique in which a word—any word—is written vertically down the page. This arrangement allows words and phrases to flow from each letter of the vertical word. 

 

In this example, the author explores a new technique using the word "PRESSURE." Starting with the letter "P," he chooses the word "Please." The next line begins with the letter "R," which rhymes with "Please," and the second word in that line must also start with "R." This pattern continues, with each line increasing in length until the final line, where the last word must rhyme with the last word of the previous line.

Listen to poem:

PRESSURE: Heavy Burden

Please.
Release respectfully.
Especially eighth entrance.
Silence, sister smoking stone.
Smartphone softly seeking shadows still.
Uphill urging, unheard utterances, unfilled using.
Rising reckon relentlessly remains real reaching resolve.
Evolve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Be the first to comment on this poem. Encourage this poet.

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace