Barry Stebbings Poet Rhyme

Presents

Presents


     Precious gifts a packing,

     Pretty christmas wrapping,

     Parents busy stacking,

     Presents piled by the tree.

     Parcels for family,

     Placed with love carefully.

     Putting one just for me!

         11/12/16

For Christmas Pleiades Contest
By Andrea Dietrich

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Jan Allison January 7, 2017 at 6:08 PM Dropping back to say congrats on your win Barry:-) hugs Jan xx Barry Stebbings January 8, 2017 at 12:04 PM Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong January 6, 2017 at 12:44 PM You got your's to rhyme Barry, which is not an easy feat. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) 7 Barry Stebbings January 6, 2017 at 12:54 PM Thank you very much, Connie. // Barry.

Kim Rodrigues January 5, 2017 at 10:54 PM Lovely, Barry! Congrats! Barry Stebbings January 6, 2017 at 10:36 AM Thank you Kim. // Barry

Andrea Dietrich January 5, 2017 at 9:05 PM Barry this is a charming poem and I really loved the ending: putting one just for me! Congrats on a job well done. Barry Stebbings January 6, 2017 at 10:36 AM Thank you very much for my win, Andrea. I liked the last line too, lol. // Barry

Winged Warrior December 21, 2016 at 1:08 PM A pleasant pleiades my friend...best of luck and god bless...^WW^ Barry Stebbings December 22, 2016 at 9:12 AM Thank you very much, WW. // Barry

Sara Kendrick December 12, 2016 at 4:25 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara Barry Stebbings December 13, 2016 at 12:32 PM Thank you very much, Sara. // Barry

CayCay Godwin December 12, 2016 at 10:39 AM Presents Nice! And so is your Pleiades entry - I enjoyed it ... CayCay Barry Stebbings December 13, 2016 at 12:25 PM Thank you very much, CayCay. // Barry

Mike Hauser December 11, 2016 at 4:35 PM Nice! Barry Stebbings December 13, 2016 at 12:24 PM Thank you, Mike. // Barry

Judy Ball December 11, 2016 at 2:44 PM Nicely done Barry. I always get so excited about Christmas and seeing how pleased family members are to receive what I have chosen for them. Great job. There is nothing sadder than a Christmas tree with no presents under it. God Bless, JB Barry Stebbings December 11, 2016 at 2:51 PM Thank you Judy. I can't imagine anything more lonely than a Christmas tree without presents. // Barry

Jan Allison December 11, 2016 at 2:35 PM Yours is the first one I've read about actual gifts ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Barry Stebbings December 11, 2016 at 2:46 PM Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry