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Presents Precious gifts a packing, Pretty christmas wrapping, Parents busy stacking, Presents piled by the tree. Parcels for family, Placed with love carefully. Putting one just for me! 11/12/16 For Christmas Pleiades Contest By Andrea Dietrich

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2017 6:08:00 PM

Dropping back to say congrats on your win Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/8/2017 12:04:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/6/2017 12:44:00 PM

You got your's to rhyme Barry, which is not an easy feat. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) 7

Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/6/2017 12:54:00 PM

Thank you very much, Connie. // Barry.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/5/2017 10:54:00 PM

Lovely, Barry! Congrats!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/6/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Kim. // Barry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2017 9:05:00 PM

Barry this is a charming poem and I really loved the ending: putting one just for me! Congrats on a job well done.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/6/2017 10:36:00 AM

Thank you very much for my win, Andrea. I liked the last line too, lol. // Barry

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/21/2016 1:08:00 PM

A pleasant pleiades my friend...best of luck and god bless...^WW^

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/22/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thank you very much, WW. // Barry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/12/2016 4:25:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/13/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sara. // Barry

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2016 10:39:00 AM

Presents Nice! And so is your Pleiades entry - I enjoyed it ... CayCay

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/13/2016 12:25:00 PM

Thank you very much, CayCay. // Barry

Mike Hauser

Date: 12/11/2016 4:35:00 PM

Nice!

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/13/2016 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, Mike. // Barry

Judy Ball

Date: 12/11/2016 2:44:00 PM

Nicely done Barry. I always get so excited about Christmas and seeing how pleased family members are to receive what I have chosen for them. Great job. There is nothing sadder than a Christmas tree with no presents under it. God Bless, JB

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/11/2016 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Judy. I can't imagine anything more lonely than a Christmas tree without presents. // Barry

Jan Allison

Date: 12/11/2016 2:35:00 PM

Yours is the first one I've read about actual gifts ! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/11/2016 2:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan. // Barry