Present Leads To Future

Accepting your past Learning from present moment Enclose life lessons Writing exciting chapters Sparkling zest to the future Example for Future contest 5-8-2016

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/8/2016 6:49:00 PM

I too concur with your message Nayda.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/8/2016 3:51:00 PM

and a really great example, Nayda. No one can see where they're going if they continue looking at where they've been.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/8/2016 3:38:00 PM

I really like the way you begin this poem and the way it continues in a positive way as we learn from past experience. Wonderful wisdon Nayda. Oh, you have a new contest going I see. I will try to write something for it but I am not good at tankas. Cheers, Connie