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Prerequisite For a Tranquil Marriage

Two TVs required

     One for him to eyeball sports

          Hers for home shopping

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 3 in Linda's "Awesome Advice" (For Bride and Groom) Contest - August 2010

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 8/31/2010 10:07:00 AM

Good advice, Bob. Thnx for leaving comments on my writes. Means a lot to me! Peace, Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2010 5:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Robert in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2010 9:14:00 PM

Congratulations, Loved your humorous approach!

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/22/2010 7:16:00 PM

Always unique! Real good advice, Robert! So there'll be no fights over the remote! Congratulations on your 3rd Place Win! Peace, love, Audrey

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 8/22/2010 10:03:00 AM

haha, two TVs is a must, otherwise the wife never gets a look in with the remote. Enjoyed your humerous senryu. Congratulations on your win ~ Sharon :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/22/2010 6:49:00 AM

LOl, made me smile...So true my friend...Michael

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/21/2010 9:00:00 PM

I'm not so sure that this is a prerequisite as much as it might be the key to a happier day. Interesting point, Robert. I'll have to mull this one over a bit. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C.

Skat A

Date: 8/21/2010 7:37:00 PM

Smiles Bob H.:-) Glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/21/2010 6:13:00 PM

cute one, congrats on win

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/21/2010 4:16:00 PM

Great advice. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 8/21/2010 3:34:00 PM

Congrats. Sarge. Nice going. You guys have a great weekend. Ralphie

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/21/2010 10:52:00 AM

first line. the truth. lol. jhl

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/21/2010 10:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win Bob, hope you are having an awesome weekend, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/21/2010 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Bob. I love this one!! I think it stood out among the other more serious senryu poems. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2010 7:31:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Bob .. however the system will not let me finalize or post my winning list due to system errors.. so enjoy..with luv ciao..

Marycile Beer

Date: 8/21/2010 7:22:00 AM

Now this is really to the point, Bob. We had two for a while but when Billy lost his leg and had problems healing I made him move upstairs. I then would go to the computer and work on my columns or novels and share the emails with him. It worked out pretty good. They were in the same room too. God Bless, Cile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2010 8:30:00 PM

Gosh, I hope you placed with this. I would put it way at the top. haha. GREAT funny. LUv, Andrea ps. I was too busy playing today and this one got completely past me!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2010 6:27:00 PM

Well this is unique, Bob, and very witty too! Guess you wanted to tickle the bride and groom's funnybones, eh? Enjoyed this refreshing, uplifting write. Gave me a smile! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn