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Prerequisite For a Tranquil Marriage

Two TVs required

     One for him to eyeball sports

          Hers for home shopping

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 3 in Linda's "Awesome Advice" (For Bride and Groom) Contest - August 2010

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Jimmy Anderson

August 31, 2010 at 10:07 AM

Good advice, Bob. Thnx for leaving comments on my writes. Means a lot to me! Peace, Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 23, 2010 at 5:49 AM

Congratulations on your win Robert in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2010 at 9:14 PM

Congratulations, Loved your humorous approach!

Audrey Haick

August 22, 2010 at 7:16 PM

Always unique! Real good advice, Robert! So there'll be no fights over the remote! Congratulations on your 3rd Place Win! Peace, love, Audrey

Sharon Tideswell

August 22, 2010 at 10:03 AM

haha, two TVs is a must, otherwise the wife never gets a look in with the remote. Enjoyed your humerous senryu. Congratulations on your win ~ Sharon :)

Michael J. Falotico

August 22, 2010 at 6:49 AM

LOl, made me smile...So true my friend...Michael

Daniel Cwiak

August 21, 2010 at 9:00 PM

I'm not so sure that this is a prerequisite as much as it might be the key to a happier day. Interesting point, Robert. I'll have to mull this one over a bit. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C.

Skat A

August 21, 2010 at 7:37 PM

Smiles Bob H.:-) Glad I stoped to read your wonderful poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat

Francine Roberts

August 21, 2010 at 6:13 PM

cute one, congrats on win

Joyce Johnson

August 21, 2010 at 4:16 PM

Great advice. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

August 21, 2010 at 3:34 PM

Congrats. Sarge. Nice going. You guys have a great weekend. Ralphie

John Loving Iii

August 21, 2010 at 10:52 AM

first line. the truth. lol. jhl

Wilma Neels

August 21, 2010 at 10:00 AM

Congrats on your win Bob, hope you are having an awesome weekend, love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

August 21, 2010 at 7:47 AM

Congratulations on your win, Bob. I love this one!! I think it stood out among the other more serious senryu poems. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 21, 2010 at 7:31 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Bob .. however the system will not let me finalize or post my winning list due to system errors.. so enjoy..with luv ciao..

Marycile Beer

August 21, 2010 at 7:22 AM

Now this is really to the point, Bob. We had two for a while but when Billy lost his leg and had problems healing I made him move upstairs. I then would go to the computer and work on my columns or novels and share the emails with him. It worked out pretty good. They were in the same room too. God Bless, Cile

Andrea Dietrich

August 20, 2010 at 8:30 PM

Gosh, I hope you placed with this. I would put it way at the top. haha. GREAT funny. LUv, Andrea ps. I was too busy playing today and this one got completely past me!

Carolyn Devonshire

August 20, 2010 at 6:27 PM

Well this is unique, Bob, and very witty too! Guess you wanted to tickle the bride and groom's funnybones, eh? Enjoyed this refreshing, uplifting write. Gave me a smile! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn