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Listen to the thunder of waves As it heralds the change of tides It comes day or night, no fixed time Watch out for the lightning that raves As it does not choose any side It strikes like a broken rhyme

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Date: 2/24/2025 12:32:00 AM
Love it! Congratulations
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Ian Jay Plaza
Date: 2/24/2025 1:00:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 2/23/2025 11:52:00 AM
"It strikes like a broken rhyme"...I love that. Congratulations xoxo
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Ian Jay Plaza
Date: 2/23/2025 12:17:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/23/2025 11:51:00 AM
Love this. Short profound poems are the best!
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Ian Jay Plaza
Date: 2/23/2025 12:18:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/23/2025 7:26:00 AM
beautiful write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Ian Jay Plaza
Date: 2/23/2025 12:18:00 PM
thank you
Date: 2/23/2025 5:41:00 AM
Ian, CONGRATS on your win. Great simile! Janice
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Ian Jay Plaza
Date: 2/23/2025 12:18:00 PM
Thank you

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