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Prelude To Sleep

open window's symphony rain falling softly, lightly crescendoes, pounds then again, diminishes each landing, a note - plip - on balcony's slate - plop - on wooden rail - ping - on metal roof - paapf - on leafy tree bird's flute sweet-swirling an octave above the rest meter drawn from distant church bells - clang - clang - clang - cars passing - swisssssssh - their wake the maestro's flourish thunder's deep rolls sforzando al fine sleep

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Date: 11/7/2011 11:05:00 PM
What an enjoyable prelude, Susan :) This sure can be a lullaby for anybody ---I love the sound of rain ---very interesting and I enjoyed how you described the sound of the raindrops upon landing :) and thank you very much for passing by my poem and for leaving an inspiring comment :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 5:27:00 PM
lovely images. i like the variety of sounds you managed to spell! (paapf is my favorite)
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Susan Buchel
Date: 9/18/2011 8:33:00 PM
thanks, Ilene, for noticing - and commenting.

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