Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Prehistoric Man

There are certain times in everyone's life
When we stop and sit there stunned
We meet this sweetie who blows us away
A totally unexpected someone

You find out things you never knew
Bout this person who blows your mind
A quality that's so infectious and sweet
It's head over heels defined

You're over the moon, as high as a kite
You are literally blown away
In love with a creature who's so amazing
They've no equal in any way

Your appetite's gone, your mind is mush
Don't know the time of the day
You're incoherent while talking to people
Can't decipher what you say

So it all comes down to love sweet love
With us for thousands of years
We all revert back to a prehistoric man
When that sweet sweet soul appears

© Jack Ellison 2013

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Carl Fraser December 7, 2013 at 9:13 PM Aint that the truth brother, and there aint a one of us that can deny it. Always a pleasure you read your stuff Jack, blessings, Carl Jack Ellison December 7, 2013 at 9:22 PM Thanks my dear friend for your kind word! Cheers, Jack

Carol Eastman December 7, 2013 at 8:54 AM I don't think Dragon will have to revert back... very far! And heaven forbid how he'll act... when his one true love appears... The only thing I'm sure of is... our teaching and influence will be over... Maybe we should raise another Dragon just for him... Er... Maybe Not!... Two of them would probably gang up on us... Shudder... LOL... Now that would be quite a predicament! The world may never be ready for that one.... Jack Ellison December 7, 2013 at 12:58 PM Did I ever tell you, no one else writes reviews like you? No? Well... no one else writes reviews like you my dear Carol! In the dictionary beside the word, "unique" is a pictUre of you! XOXOXOX

Russell Sivey December 7, 2013 at 8:09 AM Awesome, this is a totally awesome write my friend! You have amazed me by the splendor of this astounding poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece, Great Work!! Jack Ellison December 7, 2013 at 8:23 AM Thank you once again my good friend! Cheers!