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Prehistoric Man

There are certain times in everyone's life When we stop and sit there stunned We meet this sweetie who blows us away A totally unexpected someone You find out things you never knew Bout this person who blows your mind A quality that's so infectious and sweet It's head over heels defined You're over the moon, as high as a kite You are literally blown away In love with a creature who's so amazing They've no equal in any way Your appetite's gone, your mind is mush Don't know the time of the day You're incoherent while talking to people Can't decipher what you say So it all comes down to love sweet love With us for thousands of years We all revert back to a prehistoric man When that sweet sweet soul appears © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/7/2013 9:13:00 PM
Aint that the truth brother, and there aint a one of us that can deny it. Always a pleasure you read your stuff Jack, blessings, Carl
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 9:22:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend for your kind word! Cheers, Jack
Date: 12/7/2013 8:54:00 AM
I don't think Dragon will have to revert back... very far! And heaven forbid how he'll act... when his one true love appears... The only thing I'm sure of is... our teaching and influence will be over... Maybe we should raise another Dragon just for him... Er... Maybe Not!... Two of them would probably gang up on us... Shudder... LOL... Now that would be quite a predicament! The world may never be ready for that one....
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 12:58:00 PM
Did I ever tell you, no one else writes reviews like you? No? Well... no one else writes reviews like you my dear Carol! In the dictionary beside the word, "unique" is a pictUre of you! XOXOXOX
Date: 12/7/2013 8:09:00 AM
Awesome, this is a totally awesome write my friend! You have amazed me by the splendor of this astounding poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/7/2013 8:23:00 AM
Thank you once again my good friend! Cheers!

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