Prehistoric Advice

We converse and cavort here upright,
as the stars twinkle brightly tonight.
Then the scent comes on strong,
in the morning. So long!
Hungry Rex is too eager to bite!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 4, 2011 at 7:22 PM
Gerard,.. wow! is this an era waiting to be found.. great limerick... i like the thought and proposition takes when anxious to feed the mind or anything else.. take care,..p.d.
Song Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 5:15 PM
Love writing bout dinosaurs- This limerick is fun and had strong rhyme. Love the SO LONG-indicates he's outta here! Ready to pound some smaller carnivore! Blessings! gwendolen
Neels Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Quite a clever and witty write Gerard, thank you so much for your kindness and for all the smiles you always bring to my face.. Hope your weekend's been good, :) love Wilma
Rutherford Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:31 AM
Gerard very good advice too . Great second line. The so long part ,is brilliant. Anne
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April 30, 2011 at 5:19 AM
A very good Limeric here dear poet, jaunty and filled with, "Hungry" thought ! I like it very much ! In regards them "Skins"....at least we got rid of that Eagles player ! lol Have a great weekend Gerard ! much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 11:45 PM
hmmm, is this contest still going? I thought it had closed. WEll, if it is still going I hope you do well with it Gerard. It's very clever! Love it.
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2011 at 9:50 PM
oh, what a roaring write, gerard! you pulled it through, wow! :) huggs, nette
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