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Pregnant With Deceit

Their flashy words so rhetorical
Nothing new, just all historical
Words pregnant with deceit
Costumes mailed, in receipt
Unmasked, see... most are identical

For Carolyn's "Election Humor Contest"

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 11/15/2010 1:28:00 PM

This was great Audrey.You are so welcome cause I love to read other people's words.Teresa

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/8/2010 1:42:00 PM

Congrats, Audrey. Great entry. Nice going. xxxRalph

Noel Villarosa

Date: 11/7/2010 9:35:00 PM

A1 for this beautiful limerick and congratulations, Audrey for winning this. Very few we can meet nowadays a truly dedicated on their duty as a public servant, you hit them with your words that they are identical and their words monotonous and pregnant of full deceit. (^_^) Noel.

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/7/2010 8:23:00 PM

great entry Audrey, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2010 6:06:00 PM

YES YES< this is one of the best ones! congratulations, Audrey. lUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2010 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Audrey in Carolyn's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/7/2010 2:06:00 PM

yes indeed Audrey ---was your second line historical or histerical....either one works eh/? congrats on a fine poem and insight!

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/7/2010 12:55:00 PM

Audrey ..Many congrats on winning in contest with this nice piece. Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta

John Freeman

Date: 11/7/2010 11:30:00 AM

Haaaaaaaaa! I like that "pregnant with deceit!" Congratulations pn your poem's honor. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/7/2010 11:26:00 AM

Audrey super congratulations on your win with this witty write ;) love W

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/7/2010 7:02:00 AM

A limerick with wit and clever metaphors!! Well done!!! Congratulations on your win, Audrey!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/7/2010 5:44:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/7/2010 5:23:00 AM

When the masks come off, they all do seem to be the same, Audrey. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/31/2010 11:44:00 PM

Best of luck, my friend. Very witty, indeed. Luv, Joy (Jew)

John Freeman

Date: 10/30/2010 5:06:00 PM

They aren't just nearly pregnant with deceit, they are full of it, hun Audrey? Same O same O, if we vote we'll need to figure who's the lesser of the two evils. Maybe! Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/30/2010 2:24:00 PM

Very witty and humorous expressions on the present day election. Audrey

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/30/2010 1:51:00 PM

I love your limerick for Carolyn's contest Audrey. I reckon politicians are all the same no matter where in the world we are. Good luck for the contest. Love Wilma