Pregnant Pause

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Erst desires manifest, within this dream Burst of illusions, befuddling our mind Thirst within our heart renewing all these forms Worst are fears we thought we had left behind Clue to freedom, in each breath pulsation View void of polarity interchange Cue, the pause of hearts metanoia Spew joy oh hermit, in loving exchange 06-June-2021 (Syllabic Lento. Rhyme pattern abcb, defe) Lento 8-lines poetry contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/5/2021 5:45:00 AM

Beautifully penned , many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/5/2021 7:41:00 AM

Thank you, Jan!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2021 9:49:00 PM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 7/5/2021 2:34:00 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/7/2021 7:50:00 AM

Hi Seeker, I echo what Edward said; you made this form look easy, I know first-hand that it isn't. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/7/2021 8:55:00 AM

Oh! The words came in without effort, lucky me, I guess!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/6/2021 6:46:00 AM

Lento is a rather challenging form to execute but you pull it off seamlessly, Seeker:-) Fantastic poem! Good luck in the contest!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/6/2021 6:54:00 AM

Thank you Edward!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2021 5:22:00 AM

After thoughts of joy are more than welcome.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/6/2021 6:55:00 AM