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Preferential Treatment

grandson sleeps on couch, wrapped up like a tortilla -
                                                                guest rooms are empty

grandchildmonoku

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Panagiota Romios

February 28, 2024 at 6:40 PM

Shades of poetess Charmng, Oangie Elena, as a swwr uoung thing!

Gershon Wolf

February 20, 2024 at 8:22 PM

Holy Guacamole! ... If you take him to a fancy restaurant, does he order a peanut butter and jelly sandwich? Enjoy him. :) - Gershon

Paige Hind

February 20, 2024 at 9:53 AM

Oh, so cute! Love your description here. <3

Duke Beaufort

February 19, 2024 at 5:34 PM

It's a very sweet description. It has to be nice having him with you!

Kim Rodrigues

February 19, 2024 at 7:36 PM

Love when he visits :) Thanks, Duke!

Joseph P. DiMino

February 19, 2024 at 9:58 AM

Maybe makes him feel more like family than a guest? Kids. Difficult to think back when. Thoughtful work.

Kim Rodrigues

February 19, 2024 at 3:20 PM

I think he likes the big tv in living room. He falls asleep early enough so no big deal :)

Jerry Brotherton

February 19, 2024 at 3:07 AM

I think my grandson can fall asleep leaning up against the wall. A nice monoku, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

February 19, 2024 at 3:21 PM

LOL…too funny!

Ilene Bauer

February 18, 2024 at 2:09 PM

charming and delightful, kim!

Kim Rodrigues

February 19, 2024 at 3:26 PM

Thank you, Ilene! :)

Sam Kauffman

February 18, 2024 at 9:25 AM

A lovey, tender, cozy picture with fabulous imagery, Kim, like a tortilla! Loved it. Grandsons are truly a special gift! Thank you for this lovely snapshot in your family album!!! Lenten blessings and a hug!