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grandson sleeps on couch, wrapped up like a tortilla -
                                                                guest rooms are empty

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/28/2024 6:40:00 PM

Shades of poetess Charmng, Oangie Elena, as a swwr uoung thing!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/20/2024 8:22:00 PM

Holy Guacamole! ... If you take him to a fancy restaurant, does he order a peanut butter and jelly sandwich? Enjoy him. :) - Gershon

Paige Hind

Date: 2/20/2024 9:53:00 AM

Oh, so cute! Love your description here. <3

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/19/2024 5:34:00 PM

It's a very sweet description. It has to be nice having him with you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2024 7:36:00 PM

Love when he visits :) Thanks, Duke!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/19/2024 9:58:00 AM

Maybe makes him feel more like family than a guest? Kids. Difficult to think back when. Thoughtful work.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2024 3:20:00 PM

I think he likes the big tv in living room. He falls asleep early enough so no big deal :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/19/2024 3:07:00 AM

I think my grandson can fall asleep leaning up against the wall. A nice monoku, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2024 3:21:00 PM

LOL…too funny!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/18/2024 2:09:00 PM

charming and delightful, kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2024 3:26:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/18/2024 9:25:00 AM

A lovey, tender, cozy picture with fabulous imagery, Kim, like a tortilla! Loved it. Grandsons are truly a special gift! Thank you for this lovely snapshot in your family album!!! Lenten blessings and a hug!