Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Haiku

Prediction

Your heart an iceberg
My passion, boiling lava
Deluge predicted!*  
  

© Demetrios Trifiatis
 29 OCTOBER 2014 


*Because of a malefaction three of my poems were deleted
  along with the comments! I repost only PREDICTION just to
  be over the 500 mark. I am sorry and I thank you!

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 2, 2014 at 10:25 AM Iceberg vs. boiling lava wow. I have seen Volcano. Not real, in film. But iceberg will melt. No worry Demetrios deluge predicted literally. I think D life is OK for you. It's OK with me too. Immense love for you....RAJAT Demetrios Trifiatis November 2, 2014 at 10:43 AM Thank you so much my friend, RAJAT! You are right! Love from me too!

Liam Mcdaid November 2, 2014 at 7:50 AM red cells burning in this beautifully penned piece dear pal smiling Demetrios Trifiatis November 2, 2014 at 9:43 AM Liam, my friend, it is so gracious of you to visit and comment. Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 1, 2014 at 12:51 PM - Yes, ..... deluge of passion, boiling lava ...... icy water will steam away - Well done my friend Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2014 at 1:24 PM Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise for your visit and enthusiastic comment!

Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2014 at 9:24 AM Is your thesis available on line? Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2014 at 12:07 PM No it isn't! It is written in French.

Richard Lamoureux November 1, 2014 at 8:31 AM Joining of extreams is sure to create a spectacular reaction. Each has what the other lacks and the result can be extrodinary as is your poem. Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2014 at 8:51 AM Absolutely right you are my friend, Richard! My Thesis is written on Heraclitus' theory of opposites! Thank you so much!

Dan Helppi October 30, 2014 at 9:21 PM She just might cool you off dear Demetrios! Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:12 AM Let her melt and then the cooling is welcome! Ha-ha! Thank you so much Dear, Dan! So kind of you to visit and comment!

Casarah Nance October 30, 2014 at 7:13 PM I am glad you reposted it, this is a great one to read :) Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:15 AM Obviously, not all ladies have got an... iceberg as a heart, just very few! Thank you dear, Casarah, for your visit and comment! I appreciate it!

Ilene Bauer October 30, 2014 at 6:54 PM ha! so very clever, demetrios! Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:23 AM As you very well know my, dear Ilene, cleverness is not enough to melt an iceberg! Ha-ha! More skills are required and I wonder if I have what it takes!

Tim Smith October 30, 2014 at 6:38 PM Two hearts coming together as one...steamy Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:24 AM TIM, you are a gentleman! Thank you for re-visiting and re-commenting in such a "steamy" way!

Jan Allison October 30, 2014 at 6:10 PM when boiling hot meets cold it will be steamyyyyyyyy. Hugs Jan xxx Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:25 AM You a Lady my dear, Jan! Thank you for your kindness to re-visit and re-commenting!

David Meade October 30, 2014 at 5:52 PM A deluge of love . . . does not get any better than that -- I feel the steam rising. All the best. Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2014 at 5:29 AM Thank you my friend, David, for your gracious visit and comment!