Notes About The Poem

Predestination

Circuitous
their journey to love.
Their eyes
first met
half a lifetime ago.
They were young.
Buds yet to bloom;
much too young then!
Neither knew
what love was
or meant,
but they felt
a certain magnetism,
an undeniable spark.
Alas! It caught no fire.
They were pulled asunder
by destiny,
force of circumstance.
But a chance encounter
ignited the spark
of attraction
in their eyes
many moons later.
It was sheer predestination!
They were meant 
to reach the same 
destination.
A circle...
completes itself.


COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (5)any form any theme contest (Winner: 1st Place)	
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written: 09/07/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mcgee Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Yes, these are the magic "meant to be's" of love. Well penned. Congrats on your top win.
Ibeh Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Thank you much for the visit and congrats, Jeanne:-) God bless.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful love story/poem. Some do meet again and some it is just a dream. Have a great day.............
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:57 PM
True indeed, Paula:-) Thank you for the lovely visit and congrats!
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 9:47 AM
Congrats on your top win in Brian's contest, Edward! Light and Love, Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon:-)
Kauffman Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Edward, congratulations on your first place win! This so reminds me of the story two close friends, separated by life but found each other again and are happily married! Must have been meant to be! Very nice!
Ibeh Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 2:54 PM
Thank you very, Sam:-) I've heard about such a story myself. Kismet is truly a wondrous thing!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:52 AM
Love this, Edward! So nicely done in short lines!
Ibeh Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
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