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Predawn of Life

Stillness of the night Dark, foreboding, searching Silent wish for a changing To break the nothing. A lone energy Moves about, imagining The way to self expression Plan in the making. Sacrificing all To end this darkness, and call The might by love that creates And the Force took shape. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 04.25.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 11:50:00 AM
Dear Caroline Cecile, So much Creativity About Creation Superbly painted Tapestry of Art YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:19:00 PM
In the beginning was the WORD!
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:45:00 PM
Hey, pretty good stuff about creation. I enjoyed it. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:39:00 PM
Nicely done. I prefer this over the Big Bang Theory. The title prepares us well for what we read.
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Date: 4/29/2010 11:18:00 AM
Intense words with a nice lead in to other adventures... enjoyed your creative write today Caroline... see u on Facebook later hopefully..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/26/2010 6:51:00 PM
This fine poem reads so well, it was a pleasure to find it...Margaret
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Date: 4/26/2010 10:42:00 AM
Bravo Caroline, I believe that is pretty close. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/26/2010 3:35:00 AM
Great Choka, Caroline! Enjoyed reading it! Gefällt mir gut! Have a great week ahead and thank you für die Kommentare!!! Gert
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:44:00 PM
Hi Caroline- Cool poem on "the Force". -Robert.
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:07:00 PM
enjoyed reading today.
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