Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

Predawn of Life

Stillness of the night
Dark, foreboding, searching
Silent wish for a changing 
To break the nothing.
A lone energy
Moves about, imagining
The way to self expression
Plan in the making.
Sacrificing all
To end this darkness, and call
The might by love that creates 
And the Force took shape.


By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 04.25.10

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire May 3, 2010 at 11:50 AM Dear Caroline Cecile, So much Creativity About Creation Superbly painted Tapestry of Art YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL

David Byrne May 1, 2010 at 7:19 PM In the beginning was the WORD!

Andrea Dietrich April 29, 2010 at 9:45 PM Hey, pretty good stuff about creation. I enjoyed it. LUv, andrea

Joe Flach April 29, 2010 at 8:39 PM Nicely done. I prefer this over the Big Bang Theory. The title prepares us well for what we read.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 29, 2010 at 11:18 AM Intense words with a nice lead in to other adventures... enjoyed your creative write today Caroline... see u on Facebook later hopefully..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Margaret Foster April 26, 2010 at 6:51 PM This fine poem reads so well, it was a pleasure to find it...Margaret

John Freeman April 26, 2010 at 10:42 AM Bravo Caroline, I believe that is pretty close. Agape, Moses

Gert W. Knop April 26, 2010 at 3:35 AM Great Choka, Caroline! Enjoyed reading it! Gefällt mir gut! Have a great week ahead and thank you für die Kommentare!!! Gert

Robert A. Dufresne April 25, 2010 at 5:44 PM Hi Caroline- Cool poem on "the Force". -Robert.

Doris Culverhouse April 25, 2010 at 5:07 PM enjoyed reading today.