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Predator Vs Prey

Sitting Waiting Watching. The prey has felt no Fear. It carries out a form of normalcy. The predator Stalks The prey. This is the moment. Dead now- The prey is no longer alive. Predator wins. On to the next prey. On to round two.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 12:18:00 AM

Ashley Blodgett, awesome poem. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 8/15/2015 1:21:00 AM

ASHLEY, I like this very much SKAT

Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:23:00 PM

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2011 6:16:00 AM

Creative and interesting verses on Predator and prey, Ashley

Nick Bagnall

Date: 4/8/2011 4:52:00 AM

Very stark style. be careful of using the same word twice too close together, it can sound arkward (I'm talking about the word 'now' incidently) - interesting, a bit vicious for my taste.