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Perfect,

always aligned alphabetically

(even the space between you and me)

is proper

and positioned,

Precisely

 

 

Clearly,

clothing is optional

(as continents collide)

It is certain

that,

our connection

is defined as definite

and,

meant to be

_____________

 

 

* A simple Scribble *

Souls sweetly Serenade . . .

an attraction always aligned

 

Precisely

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Perfect, 
always aligned alphabetically
(even the space between you and me)
is proper 
and positioned, 
Precisely


Clearly,
clothing is optional
(as continents collide)
It is certain
that,
our connection 
is defined as definite
and,
meant to be
_____________


* A simple Scribble *
 Souls sweetly Serenade . . . 
an attraction always aligned
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Derden Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 11:53 AM
Beautifully intertwined themes of order and chaos, suggesting a perfect, fated connection that defies conventional boundaries. Its imagery of colliding continents and serenading souls creates a powerful sense of an inevitable, deeply spiritual bond.
Nicole Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 4:57 PM
Everything about this particular collision makes sense. Crazy, but true. Sometimes it's just meant to be. Your thoughts are beautiful and they hold so much meaning and depth. Thank you, Danny. I appreciate you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Herrick Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 7:59 PM
Very sensual and relatablr...__...the bottom line. Very nice.
Nicole Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Thank you, Jude. A soft connection of words stay sweetly aligned. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Hi dear friend Brandy i have no idea why i don't answer more of your remarkable poetry, spare time evades me my friend as we still have a business so i have to balance my time between work and poetry. Each of your poems are a work of art and each of your works of art have a message, your scribbles my friend are far from scribbles and have great significance, I love how 'their connection is definite and meant to be' - 'souls sweetly serenade an attraction always aligned' Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:14 PM
Jennifer, it's so good seeing you here upon my poetry page. Between moments is perfectly okay, my sweet friend. I completely understand. Balance in life is very important. I appreciate all your kind words and compliments. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Thank you for sharing your favorite lines within. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Anaya Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Sensei of sexuality, but more than that sweet one. We can write about bliss and Nirvana all day long, reality is how we connect, kindness, love, for one another. ;D My honorable Sensei.
Nicole Avatar
September 27, 2023 at 6:43 PM
You're exactly right, Anaya. Words of kindness connect poets, a deep appreciation for each other. Thank you for your lovely comment and your friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:39 AM
You my very good friend so clearly have a magnificent poet's deep heart! This finely crafted new piece proves that. A shining gem and a fav tooooooo. God bless you..
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 5:25 PM
Dear Robert, emotions deep within, always spill from my pen. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for adding this to your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Romios Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:32 PM
Hi Brandy,a sizzling poem! Penned with grace sophistication an exquisite, poetic beauty! You are a true talent! And unafraid to support others with more than a phrase. God gifted us all with your work! I know your soul, also. You held me up in difficult times because you are a being with integrity! I shall never forget that…… Thank you~ Panagiota xx
Nicole Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 6:44 PM
Dear Panagiota, thank you and your lovely comment, all your kind words about me and my poetry. You have a wonderful heart, and I admire the way you stand up for what you believe in. I appreciate you and our friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Eslinger Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 4:51 PM
As true, a true love poem! Yes, Brandy, this is how my husband & i both felt, 41 years& 7 mos. ago. when we first embraced…yes! Definite. Meant to be. A fav. Fabulous!
Nicole Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:29 PM
Sally, your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Congratulations to you and your husband. True love is forever, and every moment is like the first. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you for adding this to your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 7:03 AM
This is lovely and sensual.
Nicole Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Thank you, Richard. Moments within hold beauty, even sensuality. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Bowring Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 11:45 PM
Beautiful and romantic Brandy as always in your own unique style. Glorious, sweet, gentle and captivating. Loved it! Have a wonderful, creative week.
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2023 at 7:34 PM
So kind of you to say, Christina. :) It seems that I do have a significant style. Your lovely comment and compliment is appreciated beyond words. Thank you. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gentile Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Brandy, your romantic style is so unique and breathlessly bright and airy! It seems effortless which in and of itself, remarks on your skilled pen! I feel that I could slide right into your lines and with them become one! Just beautiful!!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Nicole Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 7:31 PM
Mike, I'm fluttering inside, with you saying you could slide in slowly; and become one with my words. You've certainly left me, breathless. When moments such as these collide, it's easy for words to caress and connect. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. Happy Monday ! :) Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 11:05 PM
Such deep and profound emotions woven in such a captivating rhythm. The flow is seamless here an so creatively you’ve woven words. So good. I especially love the opening lines
Nicole Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 7:33 PM
So kind of you to leave your heart-print upon my page, Ink Empress. As many moments and emotions linger within, love and its strong connection; hold this poem together. The opening lines are your favorite. Thank you so much for sharing. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sharma  Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:09 PM
I'm in awe of the beautiful rhythm of this piece, how beautifully flowing and spellbinding! Love this so much.. ~
Nicole Avatar
August 20, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Your lovely comment and compliment, regarding this poem of mine, brings a smile to my heart. Thank you, Hiya. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
One Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Your simple scribbles are always so good and relatable to many..Nice to see you still posting.
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Simple, that's me. Thank you, Silent One. Yes, I'm able to post between moments. So nice seeing you back. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Beautifully written. Perfect Brandy :)
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi. Your kind words bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Perfect alignment . There can be no clash. There is beauty and rhythm in this connection. So romantic too. Enjoyed reading this Brandy !
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 6:48 PM
When the connection connects, there's no clash. So wonderful, indeed. I appreciate you Valsa, and your lovely comment. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:51 PM
So smooth and so classy!
Nicole Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Such a wonderful compliment. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy
Empress Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:56 AM
Absolutely stunning and deep. Thoughtful and profound . I love the flow of this and rhythm
Nicole Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Ink Empress. So many moments and emotions within, indeed. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Barden Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:32 AM
Oh, I really enjoyed this! I don’t stop by PS often of late, but these thoughtful surprises are why I DO … I have never been disappointed by your wordart - so nice! I hope you are well, my friend.
Nicole Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Gregory, life and moments keep us busy, and I completely understand. Welcome back, my dear friend. Thank you for saying you enjoyed reading this, and you're never disappointed in my "word-art." Such a sweet thing to say. I'm doing well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Downing  Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Brandy girl, how I’ve missed your most beautiful, romantic, charming, and sexy poems. It’s good to read you again. :)
Nicole Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Blushing. Thanks, Tom. I'm not the master, I'm just me. :)
Nicole Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 5:41 PM
Akkina, so wonderful seeing your name here upon my page. :) Thank you for reading this scribble of mine, and for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:18 AM
My good friend, a profound creation. Romance perfectly aligned is the idea. Of course , clothing optional. A gem. A fav my friend. God bless.
Nicole Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Yes, when romance is aligned; moments are perfect. So wonderful, indeed. Just like clothing being optional. Thank you Robert, for your lovely comment. I appreciate you adding this to your favorites. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 12:24 AM
A sensual collision as hearts align, Wonderful write Brandy
Nicole Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Indeed ! When moments are aligned perfectly, it's magical in every way. Thank you, Joseph. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 9:01 AM
A wonderful write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
Nicole Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Dear Paula, you and your kind words are appreciated. May you have a wonderful weekend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Passionate lines as always seen upon your page. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Nicole Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Yes, passion is found within my poetic scribbles. Thank you, Sara. You and your kind words are appreciated. You're very welcome. :) Hugs, Brandy
Tor Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Excellent words that are enticing to the soul. Nicely written Mandy...
Nicole Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thank you, Michael. You and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 12:16 PM
Another lovely piece Brandy, such good imagery and insightful line of thought. Hope all is good with you, blessings, Gordon
Nicole Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 7:25 PM
Gordon, you always leave such beautiful thoughts upon my poetry. I appreciate you and your kind words. I'm doing well, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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